Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
One of the controversial questions which have occupied some universitiy students for so long is that whether a history course is necessary for everyone or not. there is no doubt that history is the great teacher and as we all have seen and heard in life that all can learn from the past. But I disagree with the rule that each student passes this course in university. The reasons I believe so are manifold, which will be discussed wildly hereunder.
The most striking reason why I don't agree with the statement is the fact that university is the place that each student should be able to study what they like based on the fact that it passes the school and definitely everyone are familiar with all the courses, thus if they don't choose history themselves the simply don't like it.
Secondly, it is crystal clear that with the study of history we get to know our history better and what happened before which lead to making a better decision but in university, each professor teaches the history behind the major that they teach. In other word students learn the useful part of the course and learn it even more precisely. Thus, there is no need to pick this course if they have no use toward it.
Last but not least, it is worth stating the point that changes in history telling which usually happens for or against the benefit of people in the current era. Of course, there is no exception in the universities course either. Therefore I think, choosing to study it on our own is better
To sum it all up, with all this taken n to account I'm not up for this statement even though studying history can be very beneficial and helpful but the advantages of passing this course by each student far outweigh those of volunteer students only taking the course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, i think, no doubt, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 316.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5917721519 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3495082618 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522151898734 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.3008286107 48.9658058833 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.909090909 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294373323214 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108477663666 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486777690871 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159371849103 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353564861212 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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