it is important to keep our old friend than making new friends
As we all have witnessed in our life, having a friend is very significant in every individual’s life. One can't choose his or her family members but have always the ability to choose a friend whom he or she can share every aspect of life with them. Although many people think that having many friends can be fun and exciting, I always rather keep my old friends than making new ones. The reasons I believe so are manifold, which will be discussed wildly hereunder.
The most striking reason why I choose this option is the fact that older friends get to know each other better and deepen their relationship. Which lead to the fact that there is no need just to share the important stuff with them but to share everything. Of course, having more friend is entertaining and getting to know new people is interesting especially the beginning but the fact is sometimes we all need someone who understands us better than our self which I think these sorts of relationship is not built instantly.
Another important factor that exists in the old relationship is the loyalty which I assume is an essential element for two people to stay friends in a long time but we ask ourselves, "why should we be loyal to a person that we just met?". which makes our old friends so precious.
Last but not least is the trust that is the base of every single relationship. Since human beings cannot trust everyone with the deepest secret of their life. And that stage is being reached through time.
To sum it up, with all this into account although meeting new people causes hearing new stories and learning new experiment which can all be useful in real life but nothing can replace a good, loyal old friend which I personally think that worth all the advantages of getting to know new people
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: Which
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al to a person that we just met?'. which makes our old friends so precious. La...
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Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the base of every single relationship. Since human beings cannot trust everyone with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67507886435 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5393283283 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539432176656 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.247840945 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340715309279 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120610435124 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133414277734 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174323429813 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991712794471 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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