Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Almost all parents at some time disapprove of (do not like) the way a teacher is teaching their child; however, it is usually better for parents not to express their disagreement to the teacher.
Teacher is the most arduous job in the world which affects one’s life significantly. A good teacher leads his or her student to a brighter tomorrow. On the contrary, a bad teacher brings a dark future to the student. When there is a conflict between students and teachers, should parents show their disagreement to teachers? Well, some parents argue that it is necessary for them to express their disagreement to teacher, however, some beg the differ to express their feels. This essay will present arguments in favor of the former opinion.
First, disagreement from parents releases conflict between student and teacher. Sometimes students are not mentally mature enough to express their feels to their teacher in an efficient way, so parents should represent their children communicating with their teacher. By showing disagreement and communicating to the teacher will lead to a positive consequence. The teacher would adjust his or her teaching method because he or she gains better understanding of learning situation of the student. As a result, parents would feel more confident and trusting to the teacher when there is going to be another conflict in the future.
Second, if parents express their disagreement to teacher, it prevents their children from excessive punishment by their teacher. Teachers are still human, although they are elites of education. Bad behaviors from students sometimes provoke teachers losing their controls, and translate into improper punishment to the student. For instance, as we can see on the daily newspaper, there are lots of teachers who punish their students and harm them physically and mentally to compensate their anger. However, expressions from parents would reduce the risk of students from being punished improperly.
Irrefutably, some parents are over protective to their children and it will reduce the quality of education. Those students protected by their parents have become burdens to the class, and it is hard for teacher to correct them without punishment. However, in this situation, teachers should open their mind and listen to the parents carefully because advices from parents will strengthen the teacher to gain stronger wills and being more experience to face the upcoming challenges. Although the teacher may not strong enough to deal with the conflict this time, he or she would handle it more properly in the future.
In conclusion, parents should express their disagreement to the teacher. While it is understandable that some people may disagree with this position, the evidence and examples provided above strongly support the argument that disagreement from parents could release conflict, prevent students form excessive punishment, and teacher would also learn a lesson from being criticized. These factors collectively make a significant progression on education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, then, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2417.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 442.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46832579186 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82690021701 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481900452489 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1832708403 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.086956522 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2173913043 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376043094403 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138966677353 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998836170208 0.0737576698707 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261542176026 0.150856017488 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331871122055 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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