Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Although science and technology will continue to improve, the most significant improvement for the quality of people's lives has already taken place.
In today's progressive world we live in, no one can turn a blind eye to the significance of technology. When it comes to whether the technology will continue to fall people's lives under its influence or not, there are different ideas. Some people believe that technology will change life quality in the coming decades as much as in the past decades. Others hold the notion that technology has already has achieved its best results. From my vantage point, the first group carries more weight. I will explain my reasons to support my idea.
First, the goal of science and technology is to boost the standards of human life so, the more progress of science and technology, the higher the quality of life. It was hard for people in the past generation to imagine this quality of life we now have, and it is also hard to guess how technology would change people's lives in the future. If you ask someone who lives in 1800 to predict life in the current century, they really couldn't give a realistic approach. People in the past generation couldn't imagine having video calls with others on the farthest continents or share live videos. These are significant treasure troves of technology and, Surprise inventions that will continue to change human life unpredictably.
Last but not least, if we count NASA projects, it wouldn't be hard to figure out how the world will change soon. They try to find a new planet to living. Same as now we could have a flight from china to Newyork, mankind would simply have a flight between planets. Colonization and travel to the other asteroids wouldn't be a dream anymore. Many things that are fiction-science right now will become fact-science. These are all might happen because the technology called technology for its wonders.
Second, there are so many problems that technology and science just try to solve, and the world is not that sheer heaven right now. Environmental issues, global warming, poverty and hunger, lack of resources, unfair distribution of wealth, unbalance in the quality of life in the different parts of the world, to name a few. Although our lives are much better than before, we still far-fetched from an ideal life that actually sync with human deserve. So, technology and science via solving these issues will keep enhancing living standards and make living conditions better for the next generations.
Last but not least,
In conclusion, all reasons mentioned above lead us to the conclusion that improvement of world changes as a result of technology and science will keep its speed because of its unpredictable nature, and also there is a lot of challenges in the worlds that they need to solve by science and cutting-edge technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, really, second, so, still, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9124726477 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66186421857 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527352297593 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.681392576 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.045454545 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260434136109 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701642590719 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487956755986 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117001574326 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665211520427 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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