Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words.
There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship.
People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful
etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing with, has some of
these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however
can be very subjective and relative.
When someone asks him/herself the question “What do I consider to be the most
important thing in my relationship?” the answer depends on a lot of factors such as how
his/her earlier relationships were.
After stating that everyone’s opinion can be different about this, for me honesty, in
other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration in a relationship.
Opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie, either s/he is hiding
something or is afraid of telling me something.
In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I’m dealing with
is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I wouldn’t like,
s/he’d better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out about a lie or
hear the truth from someone else, that’d be much more unpleasant. In that case how
can I ever believe or trust that person again? How can I ever believe that this person has
enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with the relationship from
there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person doesn’t think I can handle the
truth, there’s no point to continuing that relationship.
Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal behavior
from people, an instance of the opposite of these behaviors would not upset me as
much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty is the only one
for me that terminates how I feel about a person’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be
my first concern and the most important consideration in a relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 24, column 65, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ow I feel about a person’s reliability. Therefore honesty would be my first concern and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, i feel, such as, first of all, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08554572271 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00242532408 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542772861357 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8572582971 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.933333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157775667995 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601798150962 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560363266894 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513859465179 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621786659183 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.