Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Currenty, in a world full of false feelings and individualisms, the truth becomes a virtue endengered in any relationship. Personally, I belive that the truth is the most important consideration in relationship between people. I feel this way for two reasons, with I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, telling the thuth is a good way to solve a problem in any relationship. When you do this, you are able to recognize your mistakes and face yours problems directly. Moreover, you can have the other person supports, consequently you might solve you problem easlier. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. About ten years ago, when I was a child, I lost my new gameboy. At the time, I had already received my new video game, so I was really afraid to teel the truth to my parents. However, I told the truth. They were very disappointed with me, but I got their confidence. For this reason, we started to looking for my video game. As the result of the support of my parents I found my Gameboy.
Secondly, telling the truth is a great form to maintain a healthy relationship. Every good relationship is made of truth, becuse it is an elementary material to solve problems or attitutes that you don't aprove in other person. Consequently, you trim errors and provide robust realtionship. For instance,
the relationship between my parents always is based in the truth. They talk about their problems and together try to fix the situation. As a result, it has been 19 years since their wedding.
Therefore, I am of the opinion that telling the truth is the most fundamental virtue in any relationship, this is because you could be able to recognize your errors, find others ways to solve a problem and get supports of other persons. Moreover, it is a good idea to mantain a healthy and strong relationship in differents contexts.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e started to looking for my video game. As the result of the support of my parents...
^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to solve problems or attitutes that you dont aprove in other person. Consequently, y...
^^^^
Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...e, the relationship between my parents always is based in the truth. They talk about the...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78637770898 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93988891485 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3032996467 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.619047619 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283126358746 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080907414072 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807319980626 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166099869866 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619660080322 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 660, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e started to looking for my video game. As the result of the support of my parents...
^^
Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...to solve problems or attitutes that you dont aprove in other person. Consequently, y...
^^^^
Line 6, column 37, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is always
...e, the relationship between my parents always is based in the truth. They talk about the...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78637770898 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93988891485 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544891640867 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3032996467 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.619047619 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283126358746 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080907414072 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0807319980626 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166099869866 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619660080322 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.