Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Truth is an important part of our life. In our culture, trying to say lie instead of truth illegitimate and in some cases is forbid. Saying truth make people live easier and comfortable than before. Some of the people believe that they do need to say all thing to their partner in all relationship, a sort of lie and don't say truth, because they worry truth change their lives in bad way. Other disagree. In my view, people should have to say truth is every condition. I would like to reinforce my opinion from the following reasons.
The chief reason is that truth helps you to bolster your relation ship foundation. For example, My friend Naghme are very nice girl and we are friends for 16 years. We study all the elementary, middle, high school and university with each other. In those years we saw lots of people who wants to destroy our relationship by changing the way of our lecture or my interrupting some words. However, we both know that we never do and say anything to hurt other. Besides, Because we never have any lie be hide ourselves we easily understand when any one want to say any lie about friendship. As you see because how truth between us bolster our friendship.
Second, truth helps you to solve your problem easier than before by your lovers. All people love to help their lovers If they know and believe they say truth to them. For instance, I faced with a problem that I think I think I can't solve it by myself. Even though I know that If I say all the truth to my family, I will frustrated them. However, I say all of my conditions to them. At first, they really angry to me, but they know I say truth to them, they tries to help me until the last second. This experiment thought me how truth is important in our life and can help us.
Third, Truth helps you to believe each other all the time. If people believe each other, they easily would choose the best decision to their relationship. For example, I know that my family never say lie to me. therefore, All the time I want their opinion about my decisions. They show my weak points to me and help me to solve them. They never choose to love me blindly. On the other hand, Because I know that they judge fairly, and wisely. I try to use their experiment and foot ways to improve my self in my life. As you can see hoe truth make it easy and better our family relationship.
In sum, whether saying lies in some conditions have benefits like don't get in struggle or don't have trouble with others. We should all know that saying truth in long-term turns to our benefit. based of the reasons that I mentioned above I totally agree with saying truth in the most important part of the relationship between people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, therefore, third, for example, for instance, i think, sort of, in my view, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 97.0 43.0788530466 225% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41482965932 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34494800143 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444889779559 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4672516494 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.84375 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.59375 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03125 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162398384108 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508518433549 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639960297102 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108658623615 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412165105951 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.