Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, people try to find solution to get to happiness. In this way of thought, some people believe that keeping relationship with old friend in more important for happiness because they have lots of things to talk and they are so comfortable beside them. However, I don't think old friend could get the happiness for anyone since they have other struggles in their own lives actually they don't have time to think about you. The reason to substantiated my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
The chief reason why I generally disagree with this statement is distance between us. We need to move to other cities regularly for job, university and so on. Therefore, we couldn't be able to continue our friendship for a long time. For example, I had a good friendship with a group of nice girls in the middle school. We are so close to each other that we bought similar thing. Even though we were seeing each other in school, we called each other after school. And even if one of us faced with a problem, we all tried to solve it. However, after we accepted from different universities, in some cases in different cities, our relationship destroyed. We all take different ways. Even thought we continue to discussing, we don't have the same feeling, and emotion. As you can see how distance, problems, new life development change our relationship.
My second reason is the changing personality and believes in different life stages. We all faced with the situation in our lives either good or bad, we got life experiment from them which in and of itself would change our personality and makes a different person from us. I never can forget the time, when we old friends got to a coffee after some years. As we wanted to discuss about our lives development, I understand how time changes us. In truth, didn't enjoy the time when we spend with each other.
Last but not the last, the lack of the time and problems in scheduling an appointment with old friends. We all have some habitat where we love to spend our leisure time and relax. As for me, I love to play piano. After my class If I have any free time, I love to go out and drink a cup of tea, understandably, I can’t call any of my old friends and even if I call they may don't have time. Therefore, it would be easier for me to make new ones from the music course or from the work. By these way, I have two benefit. First, in every place I have any one to speak and talk. Second, I can improve my situation in the work and the music group that I joint.
In conclusion, taking aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe that maintaining friendship with old friend will bring us more happiness than making new ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, as for, for example, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2261.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 494.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61678260101 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495951417004 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 706.5 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2185602671 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9655172414 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0344827586 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86206896552 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191732499409 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0563803123923 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613505695239 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139038042344 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692533227332 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.