The fundamental importance of advertising keeps itself a permanent topic and recently people have even begun to ponder over the question whether advertising is an indispensable factor for any business to succeed. People are divided into two camps with opposite opinions during this discussion. There are still a lot of naysayers standing on the other side of the argument, insisting that some exceptions should be made. As far as I am concerned, this assertion is arbitrary and overgeneralized.
In my view, advertising pales in comparison to improving employees' quality of life, especially for multinational corporations with widespread brand awareness. As social development accelerates, people, especially white collar workers in conglomerates, face fierce competition. In order to ensure a decent life, they have to work hard, which places more pressure on them than before. A large number of illnesses are linked to stress, so they are likely to suffer from various health problems. Since employees with poor health have no choice but to waste a lot of time and money on improving their health, it goes without saying that they cannot devote themselves entirely to their work.
As a result, today's leading employers need to put more emphasis on their workers' physical and mental well-being instead of wasting resources on commercials that may not do much to develop brand loyalty in the first place. Second of all, most small businesses don't need to put much emphasis on advertisement either. This is because if these companies with a tight budget give a top priority to advertising, they may not have enough money to cover other expenses, such as salaries and product development, which may lead them to bankruptcy. My uncle is a telling example. The restaurant he opened in Beijing five years ago is still going strong. In the beginning, he put a great deal of emphasis on advertising and allocated many resources to promoting his restaurant online.
Despite his promotion bringing him some customers, he was unable to hire the best chef or pay the waiters competitive salaries. When the number of diners declined, my uncle decided to discontinue advertising. Instead, he devoted his resources to staff and food quality, which resulted in better food and happier employees. This resulted in an increase in customers at his restaurant. The example of my uncle illustrates that not all businesses place a high priority on advertising. Some individuals may still insist, despite my previous arguments, that advertising is the most critical factor in some cases, which is a justified opinion.
This fact does not undermine my argument. It is important to remember that just because a statement works well in some situations does not mean it holds true for all occasions. Rather than a panacea, advertising is the bane of some businesses.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...y people have even begun to ponder over the question whether advertising is an indispensable factor ...
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Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...aces more pressure on them than before. A large number of illnesses are linked to stress, so they...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e. Second of all, most small businesses dont need to put much emphasis on advertisem...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, well, such as, as a result, in my view, in some cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2386.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19825708061 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97483683865 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58605664488 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0557718873 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148463989653 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033784822666 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377032950402 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080653698263 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393372805799 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...y people have even begun to ponder over the question whether advertising is an indispensable factor ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 384, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...aces more pressure on them than before. A large number of illnesses are linked to stress, so they...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e. Second of all, most small businesses dont need to put much emphasis on advertisem...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, still, well, such as, as a result, in my view, in some cases, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2386.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19825708061 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97483683865 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 269.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58605664488 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 751.5 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0557718873 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148463989653 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033784822666 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377032950402 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080653698263 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393372805799 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.