Creativity is undoubtedly important for success in our life. Some people believe that to be successful at work, or at school we must be creative. Other disagree. Personally, I believe that creativity is important, but we hadn’t be creative to be successful for two important reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
The first important reason is that creativity doesn’t make us successful if we don’t hard work, consistent, patience, and passionate. Actually, we need all of them to be successful. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I was in high school, I had a friend who has visual intelligence. She studied at faculty of fine arts, and thus she made a lot of project in order to pass the class. She said that to me, even one of them requires months of work. Not only you need creativity, but also you must able to hard work and patience. This example taught me that creativity doesn’t enough to success.
Secondly, there are more efficient ways to be successful apart from creativity. Creativity is not indispensable part of successful. Even if people haven’t creativity, it can be genetic or acquired characteristic, they can be success. For instance, when I was in university, my roommate was quite hardworking and determined. She almost every day worked until the middle of the night, and hence she took high score from exams. However, she wasn’t successful in lab lessons as much as classic lessons. At the end of year, she won second prize as the reward of her success. As you can see, you can be successful without creativity if you hardworking, however you cannot be success if you don’t work hard even if you are creative.
In conclusion, we should not be creative to be successful. This is because, only being creative is not enough to succeed, and because there are more effective ways than creativity to be successful. We shouldn’t force children to be creative, and we should demonstrate children all ways to succeed.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To be successful at work or at school, we must be creative. 60
- Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your ans 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Are you missing a verb?
...s quite hardworking and determined. She almost every day worked until the middle of the nigh...
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Message: Did you mean 'always'?
Suggestion: always
...ive, and we should demonstrate children all ways to succeed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, apart from, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0059347181 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09185428326 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519287833828 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8884795619 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6818181818 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3181818182 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22727272727 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39372727228 0.236089414692 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113137787881 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127519506235 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269099219681 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080618108408 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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