Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for
young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
With the every changing world, sophistication of life has
increased drmatically. Advancement of technology, increasing
population and competition among young people are mainly responsible
for revolution in modern life. It is prudent for young people
to plan and structure in order to overcome challenges encountered in the
world of artificial intelligence and to be sucessful.
Firstly, persistent research and inventions ongoing every year lead to discovery of complicated machines.
In order to be successful young people should have knowledge of using latest devices and every new software.
For instance, when Apple MAC book was introduced by Steve jobs,its computer system was very intricate, so
nobody knows how to operate. But in order to acclimatize with new technology, youth has to learn to use
that efficiently. As a result, young people can do their task proficiently and at faster pace. As a consequence,
Secondly, steeping population growth and increasing number of people who possess bachelors degree creates
competitive job environment. However, highly renowned companies look for candidates who posses highly specialized degree and creative skills. For instance, famous company google employees includes highly trained software engineers in order to upgrade and offer new facilities to the world wide consumers. Moreover, young people need to search highly demanding jobs, then choose career options accordingly. As a result, it is highly recommended, that people should exhibit exclusive distinct skills to earn reputation and attain highly paid jobs.
Finally, this world is in a need of young who is healthy by both mind and body. It is crucial for the young people to check the nutrients of the food they eat and perform exercises on regular basis. Nowadays, most companies not only check background but also want to know about well being of candidate, so they refrain hiring people who suffer from cardiovascular and brain diseases. For instance, in medical field, health care employees are required to have health check before starting their job. Not only that, many companies do not allow people who are addicted to smoking, because it may hinder performance of an employee thereby reducing productivity. So there is stringent need that young people should follow healthy diet
and participate in work out regime.
In conclusion, it is inevitable for young people to be skillful in operating latest technology,
and they should make wise decision in choosing professional field and "Survival of the fittest" which is true for animal species same way applies to the young people in this modern era. So, it is worth saying that young people should have ability to wish, plan and execute
task to achieve prosperity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...anging world, sophistication of life has increased drmatically. Advancement of te...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mong young people are mainly responsible for revolution in modern life. It is pru...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o overcome challenges encountered in the world of artificial intelligence and to ...
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Line 10, column 65, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the latest'.
Suggestion: using the latest
...l young people should have knowledge of using latest devices and every new software. For i...
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Line 11, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
...le MAC book was introduced by Steve jobs,its computer system was very intricate, so ...
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Line 11, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s computer system was very intricate, so nobody knows how to operate. But in orde...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ew technology, youth has to learn to use that efficiently. As a result, young peo...
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Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly and at faster pace. As a consequence, Secondly, steeping population growth and...
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Line 15, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple who possess bachelors degree creates competitive job environment. However, hi...
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Line 16, column 284, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
...upgrade and offer new facilities to the world wide consumers. Moreover, young people need ...
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Line 16, column 284, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
...upgrade and offer new facilities to the world wide consumers. Moreover, young people need ...
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Line 16, column 379, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...arch highly demanding jobs, then choose career options accordingly. As a result, it is...
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Line 18, column 730, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... young people should follow healthy diet and participate in work out regime. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2356.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47906976744 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91366672061 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579069767442 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5109647424 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.19047619 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4761904762 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148786779819 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473785658788 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369512591588 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0458853338918 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404093272825 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 86.8835125448 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.