Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because people are busy doing so many different things they do very few things well

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...bscribe to the opinion that if one does many different things, he cannot handle all of them ap...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...books, or even attend relevant classes. All of the mentioned activities take so much time ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...d if you want to become a specialist in an specific area, you must devote several ...
^^
Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'several'.
Suggestion: several
...ney last year. Consequently, I accepted several different projects together. In the beginning eve...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 52.1666666667 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2880.0 1977.66487455 146% => OK
No of words: 599.0 407.700716846 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80801335559 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94716853372 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81839694895 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469115191987 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 911.7 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4504880956 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3103448276 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6551724138 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65517241379 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131952375002 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345703219204 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380522010892 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762142770932 0.150856017488 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215633094366 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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