Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As the world continues to develop, the mental health of myriad people have declined. Today's people virtually struggle with depression. Personally, I believe considering the pace of changes around ourselves, it is getting harder to keep up with it and this will lead to happiness deficiency in so many lives. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, nowadays everything changes in a blink of eye and nothing is stable around us. Hence, no matter how hard we try, we can not guarantee anything, and this will lead to a chaotic feeling inside us. For instance, no one can tell whether an employee will get promotion as a result of his hard work or not, since due to technological advances another person who doesn't have enough experience, but know how to use new facility might get the promotion. To avoid this situation, people must exert themselves to keep up with technology changes and this can be a harsh situation for most of the people.
Another significant reason is that the aims have also changed. In the past, most people's ultimate goal was to get a job and start a family. However, nowadays people experience an exotic thirst for integrity. It is a fact that there is always a better version of things we have, but people can not suppress their desire to get the best version of everything. Additionally, as everything is changing drastically every day, it is even harder than before to reach the zenith of everything. Repercussions of all these factors are feelings of failure and depression. My friend's experience is a great example of this. Since I have known her, she was always seeking for something that she didn't have and though she achieved different things during her progress, she never got the chance to enjoy them. Instead she set a new target and invested all her effort and time on the new goal. This consistent dissatisfaction feeling finally made her sick and killed her.
In conclusion, new world is imposing ample difficulties on humans and make them try hard to adjust themselves with all the changes. Plus, these fast changes are creating a situation that cause people, who desire to reach everything, feel like losers.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, so, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81578947368 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69639135064 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8202769964 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147406759785 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484448756225 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423084925477 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952773005813 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422905566473 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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