Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“Only thing that does not change is the change itself”, every thing must undergo the process of change. As a someone who have lived nearly three decades, I have experience the changes in the world in almost all the fields and it was rapid. It is understandable that some people are not fond of changes and most of them have the belief that modern life style of people lacks the happiness the older generation had. In contrast, I believe that the transformation happening in the world has made a world more pleasant place. In the following paragraphs , I will delve into the most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my stance.
Firstly , without a doubt today we have many sources to get the entertainment. Internet, movies, massive sport events, computer games are only few. But people in the past, particularly before seventeenth century only had books, art works to enjoy their life. Furthermore, these mediums were not accessible for everyone. For example in my country due to cultural restriction it was prohibited to read for lower cast people. Also they were not allowed in traditional theaters. However, owing to the revolutionary changes took place in social structures ,nowadays there are no such limitations. Everyone in the society can find their entertainment seamlessly through plethora of entertainment medias.
Secondly, the field of health and medicine has improved lot during past couple of centuries. This has made people to be more aware of their health, specially mental health. Since happiness is a psychological states with the advancement in human psychology current citizens can get the help of professionals to improve their mental state, hence the happiness. Moreover, with the help of new technology and medical procedures all most all the deceases have become curable and people need not to worry most illnesses that was fatal to our ancestors.
Last but not least, the development the human civilization has experienced has made a living a pleasant experience. In the past farmers had uncertainties about their crops, villages required to be on alert on wild animal attacks, traveling was not a hobby. However, science and technology has reversed these situations this is clearly evident by travelers in social media. Advancement in agriculture has given more certainty to life of farmers with higher crop yield and competitive market. Ironically, the rapid changes has made our life more certain with the help of technology.
To sum, In the light of reasons I mentioned above, It is my firm believe that the changing world has made filled most peoples lives with positive feelings. Plethora of entertainment media, development of medical field and science has improved quality of life vastly and I strongly believe that it will continue to improve and that will be a statement that will not change.
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- TPO 22 Integrated Writing Task 70
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18438177874 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86992359283 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544468546638 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 747.9 618.680645161 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7226177599 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5833333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2083333333 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206450860368 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051251263795 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416042803274 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111834012743 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279773846967 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 86.8835125448 146% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.