Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
My family has a tradition of travelling to a new place every summer vacation. We have explored most of the provinces in China and some neighbour countries. Travelling itself gives us lots of fun but what I enjoy the most is the time we plan the trip together. This essay will elaborate on why I prefer not to travel with the tour guide.
The first reason for travelling by yourself is cost-effective. Though travel agency insists they offer the best price of transportation and accomendation, there are hidden price be tagged on the trip. When signing the contract with the travel agency, customers are not only paying for their trips but also pay for the tour guide, driver, the rents of the agency and website maintenance. Those extra bills do not exist when you travel on your own. Here is an example. After each time of the family trip, one thing I would love to do is "calculating" how much we saved. Our trips usually cost 30% less when compared with the most popular offer of that destination from the travel companies.
The second reason is that the travel agency can not always provide what you want. With the development of the internet, people have easy access to information about your destination online. We can carefully think about what we really like to pay a visit instead of drafting with the trend, taking whatever travel agency is boosting. For instance, when my family was planning a trip to Nanjing, most itinerary provided by travel agency include a day trip in a cemetery. However, we more interest in the local food. If we go with the tour group, we have to give up our favourite gourmet tasting because of the limitation of the time.
The third reason for do not join in a tour group is that it can be dangerous eating and sleeping with strangers. People are excited while travelling, which may make them lose their head and trust people easily. There is news of people getting deceived by the new "friends" they made from the tour group. Some of them lost money, belongings, some of them getting raped. On the other hand, travelling with people you know is more trustworthy and you can look out for each other.
In conclusion, travel with group guide, in my opinion, does not worth the price, may not fit your appetite and even sometimes be risky. Thus, it is much better to make your own itinerary with families or friends and leave more precious memories with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, really, second, so, third, thus, while, even so, for instance, in conclusion, you know, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2020.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641509434 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68437154919 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5480650747 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228197610306 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687397144471 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547310345554 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136928023234 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232683074309 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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