Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading fiction (such as novels and short stories) is more enjoyable than watching movies. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
When I was 12 years old, I was addicted to the novel Harry Potter. Fantastic magic world and the vivid characters attract me to read the books over and over again. However, when the movie came out and became viral worldwide, I did not feel the same attraction as the novel gave to me. This essay will explore why I believe reading fiction provides people with more enjoyment by giving some reasons for my opinion.
First, if the movies are filmed based on the novels, comparing with watching movies, reading the original books allows readers to experience additional layers of pleasure. While the Harry Potters movies a huge hit of the box office, some fans of the Harry Potter books found movies disappointed. Deletion due to the restriction of the movies' time length is the main blame. Some characters were changed into a paper man serving merely as a promotor of the plot. For example, a lot of plots of "Small Uranus" were ignored when producing the movie, which turns the man with complicated feelings into a "revenging tool". On the other hand, books with unlimited paragraph can build characters more complete, which contribute to the logical development of the plot and finally help readers have a deeper understanding of the structure flow behind the story. With better comprehension, readers can not only experience excitement as the movie-goers but also allowed to taste each feeling line thoroughly.
Furthermore, if the movie is original, reading fiction can give readers a longer and more immersive experience of the wonderland than the 2 hours long movies. Movies are so-called fast food in the cultural industry, which well depicts the role of most movies--offering temporary pleasure by presenting artificial humour. Audiences laugh hard in the cinema and go home with nothing left. On the contrary, readers of the fictions can enjoy it much longer by perusing the book again and again with fresh thoughts every time. Though there are some good movies with high quality that offer more than a popcorn movie, not all audiences can appreciate them. Books, in contrast, have an immersive nature to all the readers.
In conclusion, in order to have more fun during leisure time, reading fiction is more preferable than watching movies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 608, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the man with complicated feelings into a 'revenging tool'. On the othe...
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Line 5, column 979, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'tasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: tasting
...ent as the movie-goers but also allowed to taste each feeling line thoroughly. Fur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 43.0788530466 26% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10695187166 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74334678032 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596256684492 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0377223259 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166099414006 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544442198233 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061165039742 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129368515686 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543229042489 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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