Today, most countries elect their representatives through the vote. However, students do not have a chance. Many adults think that students are still growing, so their values are not clear or they may be selected as a joke. This is a false stereotype for adults. I will tell you three reasons why they should give a chance to vote to those over the age of fifteen.
First, students are also the own of the nation. Like adults, students have their own ideas, we can not ignore them. Therefore, they have the right to vote. The development of information technology, students are more interested in politics than before, so students have their own values to some extent.
Second, the reality vote is another social class for the students. A person should learn several times to become more accustomed. Thus, students should learn before they become adults. By giving students the right to vote, they can become more interested in the country's situation and it can become a habitat. Also, they can become more mature adults later. This means that voters will rise after.
Last, students also have their own requirements. For example, in South Korea, Most candidates do not think about policies for students because they do not have the right to vote. Rather, they only think about the policies that are focused on the elderly people. If this continues, perhaps students will become less interested in politics and frustrated the nation.
This is why I think the students should get a chance to vote. I hope the governments pay more attention to teenagers and respect their thoughts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in politics and frustrated the nation. This is why I think the students should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97003745318 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48099001986 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513108614232 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3749994528 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1904761905 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0898443723431 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0321907582442 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458870616923 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614306705306 0.150856017488 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467742397853 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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