Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smartphone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of new decade with rapid rate of developing technology, it goes without saying the high impact of technology on our life. Children, as acutely vulnerable group in society, have lack immunity from the effects of developed technology, those, there has been an overwhelming weight of obsession on parents mind regarding their offspring education. The question which arises here is new technology like smartphones, online game and social network have had corrupting influences on educating children or not. Some psychologists opt for the former one; however, others might deem that the letter might carries more weight. I for one, the second attitude carries more weight, in what fallow, I will aptly substantiate my view point.
Nowadays smartphone as portable and chip device are using by large human around world. Smartphones have specific advantage that divide it from device have been already invented. One of the most featured feature of smartphones are wide spear of them in various fields from ordering food to point of caring some disses. Because of these smartphone versatile all of us spend much time to use this device. Children have been known as one of the target market of smartphones and parent always worry about use of children and effect of smartphone on children listens, therefor, software engineers have established some new apps for smartphone that are being taught to children when they are playing with their phone. With this kind of apps children kill to bird with one stone: they are studding and playing in same time and they get pleaser from studding. With this development not only studding do not be difficult but also it be so fanny and easier than before
The second aspect of current discussion is that, in recent years with developing mobile phone to smartphones, portable access to net occurred and use of social network dramatically increased. Social networks same as other technologies have some advantages and disadvantage, one of the most important of social networks benefits, it is make communication more easier than before and it has positive effect on children education in other to let them to untouched with each other and all students across the words and discuss their Lesson problems and get helps from profuse students. For example, envisage a student how face a problem when study his listens, accessing to social networking web, he able to solve his problem with other student at that moment and learn much more better than a student doesn’t assess to social network and must wait until seeing his teacher .
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smartphone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smartphone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng food to point of caring some disses. Because of these smartphone versatile all of us...
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Line 2, column 923, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...tudding do not be difficult but also it be so fanny and easier than before The se...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...orks benefits, it is make communication more easier than before and it has positive effect ...
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Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...r student at that moment and learn much more better than a student doesn't assess to s...
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Line 3, column 875, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...k and must wait until seeing his teacher .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10663507109 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65033435577 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575829383886 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.7331960833 48.9658058833 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.928571429 100.406767564 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1428571429 20.6045352989 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217899416557 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708544625522 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527389877096 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135993618064 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400529468054 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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