Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smartphone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new decade with a rapid rate of developing technology, it goes without saying the high impacts of technology on our life. Children, as an acutely vulnerable group in society, have lack immunity from effects of developed technology, those, there has been an overwhelming weight of obsession on parents mind regarding their offspring education. The question which arises here is new technology like smartphones, online game and social network have had corrupting influences on educating children or not. Some psychologists opt for the former one; however, others might deem that the letter might carries more weight. I for one, the second attitude carries more weight, in what fallow, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
Nowadays smartphones as portable and chip devices are using by a large number of people around the world. Smartphones have specific advantages that divide them from devices have been already invented. One of the most featured features of smartphones is the wide spear of them in various fields from ordering food to point of caring some disses. Because of these smartphones versatile, all of us spend much time to use this device. Children have been known as one of the target markets of smartphones and parent always worry about the use of children and effect of smartphones on children listens, therefore, software engineers have established some new apps for smartphones that are being taught to children when they are playing with their phone. With these kinds of apps, children kill to bird with one stone: they are studying and playing at the same time and they get pleaser from studding. With this development not only studying do not be difficult but also, it be so fanny and easier than before.
The second aspect of the current discussion is that, in recent years with developing mobile phones to smartphones, portable access to net occurred and the use of social network dramatically increased. Social networks, same as other technologies have some advantages and disadvantage, one of the most important benefits of social networks, it makes communications easier than before and it has salutary effects on children education in order to let them in touch with each other and all students across the world and discuss their lesson problems and ask profuse students for help. For example, envisage a student how face a problem when study his listens, accessing to social networking web, he able to solve his problem with other student at that moment and learn much more better than a student doesn’t assess to social network and must wait until seeing his teacher.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smartphone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples 83
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on smartphone, online games, and social networking web site. Use specific reasons and examples 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... portable and chip devices are using by a large number of people around the world. Smartphones ha...
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Line 2, column 968, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...udying do not be difficult but also, it be so fanny and easier than before. The s...
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Line 3, column 770, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...r student at that moment and learn much more better than a student doesn't assess to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, second, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11395348837 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70189025033 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56511627907 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.2043322064 48.9658058833 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 100.406767564 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6666666667 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20603494311 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672673285072 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047695817218 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128379318457 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361097467347 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 10.002688172 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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