Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Friendship is more important to children than it is to adults.
Friendship gives meaning to life. People usually try their best to gain friends by making extra effort to please them. While some believe that adults need friends more than children do. I beg to differ, I think that having friends in childhood is more critical. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Some individuals argue that an adult needs friends more than a child, because of the fact that adults most probably live alone, most likely they feel lonely and need a company. In my opinion, I do respect their notion but, I see things from different perspective. I strongly believe that children need friends at a younger age in order to learn some cruical life skill. tTheres skills are too late to be leart at older age. Like sharing tasts with others specially with the same age group, they need to be exposed to the real world. The parents are always tring to protect their children so they can not learn much from home. They would not know how to deal with mean and obnoxious people. So they can be ready to face reality of the tough world, As the parents will not always be there to advocate for them. I remeber when I was a child I had a vast number of friends, some of them were white-hearted but others were mean. By dealing with different kind of peopple, I was able to deal with the wild and real people in my college. having these skills helped me tremendously to overcome some life obsticles.
Moreover, I belive that adutls do need to have to a lot of friends other than their childhood friends they can have a family, one ture loving partener, a childhood friends and some casual aquaintances. lets first talk about childhood friends, we we choose them we never thinks about taking advatage of them, at that age we were pure, not like nowadays when we choose friends depending on particualr criteria for instances, money and good looking . thats why I belive that childhood friends are always real. Another thing about life partner, my eperience is a compelling example of this, I am married to my sweat-heart Khalid, We are together since the age of 16 and we know each other from elementary school. Being with him only is more than enogh for me. I feel loved and contented. For this specific reason, I think that children need friends more that adults do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, while, another thing, for instance, i feel, i think, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36357493117 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532530120482 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9966144344 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163099315531 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565720485834 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718458479748 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132585584486 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409281314435 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.