In children’s development, both teachers and parents play pivotal roles. In the school, teachers teach children professional knowledge and life skills. While at home, parents take the responsibility to educate their kids. Thus, in our society, who are more important in a child’s development is hotly debated. Were I forced to choose, I believe that a good teacher is more important. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will illustrate on in the following passages.
First, teachers are more skillful than most of parents in the field of education. They are usually well equipped with both professional skills and practical education experience. Take my sister for example, as an elementary school teacher, she not only needs to pass certain tests every year to maintain her certification but also uses her four years college to prepare the skill of education. In contrast, it’s common that parents lack specific skills or have no idea how to educate their kids unless they are excellent teachers. They may spoil their kids too much or neglect their feelings totally.
Second, after attending school, teachers are the people who will company the kids in most of the time. Even though homeschooling is popular in some places, the majority will choose to send their kids to school. School can provide kids with better study conditions like library and classroom, while teachers can teach them professional and academic knowledge that won’t be taught at home.
Admittedly, parents are still important in children’s development to some extent. They are usually the role models for the kids and will teach them important life lessons. However, in terms of depth and professionalism, they still need the help of teachers.
In conclusion, from what i have discussed above, I can safely conclude that teachers play a more important role in children’s development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
... First, teachers are more skillful than most of parents in the field of education. They are usu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25496688742 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8414165632 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582781456954 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8533567833 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179230669976 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602922978152 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530615669854 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978195982823 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05451306308 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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