Half a century ago, when Internet was first invented, no one could imagine the huge impact it had on our society. With the help of internet, nowadays people can access to the knowledge of the whole world and browse numerous news in just one click away. Some people are grateful for the advantages the internet brings. However, other people contend Internet has more negative effects on our civilization. Personally, I believe that Internet creates more benefits than harm for our civilization, and I feel this way for two reasons, which I will elaborate in the following passages.
First and foremost, Internet provides people a chance to access knowledge more freely than before. In the past, if we wanted to acquire information about foreign countries, we had to visit it in person, and the speed of transferring was relatively slow. In contrast, after the invention of Internet, anyone who has a smartphone or a computer has access to numerous online websites, such as Wikipedia and Google. Most of the online services and websites are free and open to anyone. My personal experience can be a compelling example to attest to this argument. When I was a kid in a small town, I didn't have many opportunities to view the outer world. When I was nine, my mom bought me a computer and taught me how to search for information online. Thus, I acquired a pressing technique that helped me to sight the world and ignored the borders of nation. Without the help of Internet, I wouldn't have had the chance to broaden my horizons.
Second, Internet also makes the world more connected than ever. For example, people are using American technology every day, watching Korean TV or wearing clothes made by Chinese. Globalization of the economy and politics is also the pressing part of a more peaceful world. Normal people are also empowered by Internet. Those people who were oppressed in the past, now have more channels to tell the world their stories. Genocide and other war crimes will be known to the world immediately and that really frightens the potential warlords.
In conclusion, based on what has been discussed above, I truly believe that Internet is beneficial for our civilization.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: wouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, second, so, thus, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92972972973 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71934873826 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.498944689 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103338439182 0.236089414692 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320147623133 0.076458572812 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288710271152 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0595286800592 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327901019248 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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