There is no doubt, the internet plays a crucial role in the society. No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the fact that the influence of the internet on the people lives in society. A controversial dilemma which is often raised regarding this issue is whether the government spend more money on improving access to the internet or on public transportation. There is a number of people who hold the belief that improving public transportation help to reduce air pollution so, it is very important for the environment; However, others may take an opposite perspective. I, contrary to the popular belief, concur that the second is more acceptable. In what follows, I will elaborate in my point of view through three outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my standpoint is that nowadays, people use of the internet for different purpose such as some people work through telecommunication so they need the internet or some other people buy their needs such as food, the instrument from the internet.; As a consequence, the internet is essential for the society. It goes without saying that, if people use of the internet for buying their needs, not only they can save their money and time, but also they can help to reduce pollution such as air pollution and sound pollution since they do not ride my own car for going to the shop. Furthermore, they help to reduce the traffic jam too.
The second reason coming to my mind is that the internet is the best cost-effective means of communication. People can make a relationship with each other all over the world whenever they want. For the illustration this point, I like to mention a personal experience that although my brother is studying abroad, my parents can speak with him through some application such as telegram whenever they want with a little money. Besides, the internet facilities the way of life. It means, the most of people can pay texts or other payment through the internet.
It is important to bear in my mind is the most of the machines work depend on the internet. So, most of the company cannot keep on their activity without the internet as a result, they cannot produce their product and create the money so, in the long run, they become bankrupt. A cording to a recent research, conducted by Tehran University, the majority of government that invests in the improving access of the internet for society, become developing camper with the government that not spent for it.
To make the long story short, the all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to conclude that government should spend money for improving access to the internet because it is very important for earning development. There are some other reasons and example, challenging the claim, which is not mentioned above. It is highly recommended not only by me but also by scientists that government invests to the internet. This is not just confined to the boundaries of my countries, but all people in all societies in all nations.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on improving access to the Internet than on public transportation. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has.Personally, I agree with the statement that telephone has greater influence on peoples life. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 490, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...cilities the way of life. It means, the most of people can pay texts or other payment through ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86213592233 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8055490844 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458252427184 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.1622787208 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.238095238 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5238095238 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207282765907 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662802608276 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07620877338 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129424667074 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485508463967 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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