There is no doubt, nowadays, telephone and television play a crucial role in human lives. No one can cast a shadow of doubt on the Fact that the influence of telephone and television in all aspects of peoples’ lives. A controversial dilemma which is often raised regarding this issue is whether telephone has the greater influence on peoples’ lives or television has. There is a number of people who hold the belief that people spent some of their time for example in the evening for watching television so, it can have the profound influence on people through different program and advertisements; However, others may take an opposite perspective. I, contrary to the popular belief, concur that the second is more acceptable. In what follows, I will elaborate my point of view for three outstanding reasons.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my standpoint is that nowadays, scientists not only invent telephones that have access to the internet but also invent the special application that people can watch TV program through it. Furthermore, telephones are very small, as a consequence, people can carry wherever they want, for instance, they can use in the bus, in the workplace and so on. As a result, telephones have the greater impact on peoples’ lives since they do not obligately stay in their home for watching their favorite TV program.
The second reason which deserves some words here is telephones are the best cost-effective means of communication in the world. People can get online wherever they want and call to each other through the special application such as telegram and Instagram. This event has a profound influence on people’s lives and makes people happy and satisfied. For the illustration this issue, I like to mention a personal experience that, my brother studies abroad. He is very far from our home, nevertheless, my parent sees him every day through Whats up that install on their telephone. It goes without saying that, telephones have more advantages compare to the television since people not only can use it as a television but also can as the best means of communication.
It is important to bear in my mind that people can get a lot of information when they get online with own telephone. So, they can inform about different events that happened around them through verity website very easily. According to a recent research, conducted by Tehran University, the majority of people use their telephone for getting new information and news through telephone instead of watching the news on television.
To make a long story short, all aforementioned reasons and examples lead us to conclude that invention of the telephone has the most impact on people compare with the TV since people can use it as a means of communication and watching TV program and get new information simultaneously. There are some others reasons and examples, challenging the claim, which is not mentioned above.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend more money on improving access to the Internet than on public transportation. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The telephone has greater influence on people’s lives than television has.Personally, I agree with the statement that telephone has greater influence on peoples life. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 492.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05894308943 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96328010557 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481707317073 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6180459929 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.45 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260086017895 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887743812083 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852701211792 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157810833311 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619031873967 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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