Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students can nowadays learn more information and learn it more quickly.
Learning is the act of acquiring new, modifying and reinforcing, skills or preferences and may involve synthesizing different types of information. It does not happen all at once, but builds upon and is shaped by previous knowledge. Learning May seems as a process, rather than a collection of factual and procedural knowledge. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one, is whether technology provide an opportunity for students to learn deeply or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that technology has pivotal role in student's learning. In the following paragraph, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that technology has penetrated every single facet of our lives. In fact, without technology we cannot even imagine our lives. Scientifically speaking, not until technology improves can the students progress in their learning process. Actually, our lives and education seem to be paralyzing without help of new devices like smart phone or laptop and so forth, which are the best means of communication. Nowadays vast majorities of students are dependent on technology because not only will offer many sources and information but also students are able to enhance their knowledge. Delving further into the issue reveals that hardly ever students can progress without taking advantages of technology. In fact, technology and new devices provide an opportunity for students to learn as much as possible, which can last forever. Without presence of new technology not only, will students lose their incentive but also raise dropout rates. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, revealed by a social recent research conducted in our country; show that technology plays a key role in students' learning. Students, who have had access to latest resources and version of technology, reached their pinnacle of their education and found their decent job.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that technology will provide an opportunity for student to be in close contact with others especially with prominent professors all around the world. Broadly speaking, students during their education confront trials and tribulations, which are not able to handle them. In order to solve the problems and save time, not only can they find and address weaknesses with help of technology but also can get online and consult with eminent professors at overseas universities because they will offer best solution. Going into the depth, not only can technology improves social skills but also can develop student's knowledge and make them self-sufficient in their life. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, crowds of people are not able to work with new technology in order to learn properly. In fact, many students rely on traditional methods, which they used to. There is possibility that students get confuse with use of new devices. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, technology has great impact on students' learning. Contemplating all the aforementioned reasons one soon realize that with the help of technology myriads of students will be able to enhance their knowledge and achieve to tertiary education. In addition, not only can students improve their knowledge but also can develop their social interact and make relationship even with universities abroad. I highly suggest that students should take the advantages of technology in order to get higher education. If students do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness a lagging society with obsolete sources of information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the latest'.
Suggestion: to the latest
...learning. Students, who have had access to latest resources and version of technology, re...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'offer the best'.
Suggestion: offer the best
...overseas universities because they will offer best solution. Going into the depth, not onl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y with obsolete sources of information.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23988005997 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.155922038981 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0824587706147 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0839580209895 0.046263068375 181% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0449775112444 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124437781109 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0351676179071 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94680265302 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0284857571214 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00149925037481 0.00188951952338 79% => OK
Determiners: 0.0539730134933 0.0887237588012 61% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0299850074963 0.0209618222197 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0119940029985 0.0139019557991 86% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3828.0 2387.08602151 160% => OK
No of words: 602.0 408.028673835 148% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35880398671 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.95335121839 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410299003322 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.335548172757 0.251872472559 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247508305648 0.174417080927 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.162790697674 0.112833075102 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94680265302 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 298.0 212.727598566 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495016611296 0.524397521467 94% => OK
Word variations: 61.4002239003 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6684587814 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0666666667 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4438481352 48.84282405 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.6 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.5533526081 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.366666666667 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 53.6214839424 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.4 1.45489161554 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337371831464 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0613850234179 0.103427244359 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0499466068079 0.0752933317313 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.414623623809 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.104245125318 0.151897553556 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10770346954 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581976231502 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.483119305427 0.336927656856 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0513891652472 0.067059652881 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247747198226 0.210909579961 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026357510646 0.0618886996521 43% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8870967742 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 18.0 8.42114695341 214% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 26.0 13.6433691756 191% => OK
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