Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays we cannot expect to encounter a satisfying job frequently because the number of job seeker are much more than that of staffs companies want to hire. Also getting a job at early stage of our lives will be beneficial. So if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Today, high unemployment rate is a serious concern among young generation. One of the major reasons for this is that less human workforce is necessary for operation because companies and factories start to introduce advanced machines. For example, long time ago, in most food companies, hired people pick up the items and pack them in to a bag. However, in most famous companies, automatic packaging machines are developed, and they are much more efficient than human workforce. We should not miss the chance of getting a secure job.
Also, we should decide life time job as soon as possible. This will be beneficial because we can improve our job skills and become proficient, and we can get higher salary as a result. For example, I have been an engineer for more than twenty years. One of my coworkers who is as old as I started working as an engineer five years ago because he worked as a lawyer before. Obviously I am superior to him as an engineer because I spent longer years training as an engineer.
Furthermore, we can start a new job even after we got a secure job once. Of course we have less time seeking for more satisfying occupation once we get a job, but if we don't waste our time and try hard, we will definitely be able to find another job. For example, one of my friends loves movies, and he wanted to become a film reviewer. However, he became a journalist against his will because he failed all the job interviews of a film reviewer. He kept on searching for a position as a film reviewer while he worked as a journalist, and finally he was offered a job as a film reviewer.
To sum up, getting a secure job as early as possible will be better for young people because of the reasons I mentioned in the previous paragraphs. So we should not hesitate and miss the chance.
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- TOEFL Official Guide - Practice Test 2 - Integrated Writing 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... that of staffs companies want to hire. Also getting a job at early stage of our liv...
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Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...secure job. Also, we should decide life time job as soon as possible. This will be b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...occupation once we get a job, but if we dont waste our time and try hard, we will de...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for example, of course, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54060913706 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60141388901 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2306958898 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.45 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302854712186 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107400115644 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134254794087 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204538745004 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124490248293 0.0645574589148 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.