Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with this statement. I do not like a secure job individually and I prefer to get a job that be more satisfying. in my mind, the secure job are so dangerous and I terrified of those. I like to do my job by pleasure and in every part of my job get enjoy. about waiting for a job that would be more satisfying I think, we should not have expect that get job so easily. we should think about our interest and then, we must looking for a job that we love it and we are gonna take pleasure from that job. some times we can not take a job that is related to our specialisation at first time so we must looking for that job more than we did. in my mind, the man' life will be in danger and we must take that job if we really want that and we must remember its dangers and accept those. some people do not have any problem with their work danger and we will put their life in risk and they like that. generally I think, waiting or getting a job is very personal case and that completely related to person' interesting. I prefer to get a job that I love it and I enjoy from it so if to obtain that my favor job I had to need, I will do it or if that purpose need to work hard so I will do it but I will never do one job that I do not like it. also we should think about effect of our job on our family if our job is dangerous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...r to get a job that be more satisfying. in my mind, the secure job are so dangerou...
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Suggestion: About
... and in every part of my job get enjoy. about waiting for a job that would be more sa...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'expected'.
Suggestion: expected
... satisfying I think, we should not have expect that get job so easily. we should think...
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Suggestion: We
...not have expect that get job so easily. we should think about our interest and the...
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Suggestion: Some
... are gonna take pleasure from that job. some times we can not take a job that is rel...
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Suggestion: In
... looking for that job more than we did. in my mind, the man life will be in danger...
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Suggestion: Some
... remember its dangers and accept those. some people do not have any problem with the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Generally
... their life in risk and they like that. generally I think, waiting or getting a job is ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.76978417266 4.8611393121 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15317443247 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 212.727598566 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.413669064748 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3719113976 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300281693597 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149968543503 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775883508822 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300281693597 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 4.88 10.9000537634 45% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 86.8835125448 30% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.