Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? TO improve the quality of education, university should spend more money on salaries for university professor. Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.
There is no doubt that money have a tangled effect in our quality of live. In their endeavoring to achive their ultimate dreams and goals, people, including university profesors, are required to work hard to earn more money. Although some people believe that unversities should not spend more money on professor salary, I support that the university should, indeed, increase thier professor salaries to improve education quality. The basis for my views is because with a decent salary, professors are more dedicated for their class and researches development. It also encourage them to enhance their teaching skills.
Money helps professors to focus on their career. With ever increasing in monthely expenses like mortgage, gas and car insurance, professor are under a tremendous stress to work at a second or part time career to afford not only them selfs, but also their families. Increasing their salary wadges can have a tengible effect on their career. Professor who offered a decient salary are more likely focus on his/her career as a university teacher and researcher. In other word, they can dedicated their time to finish their education tasks rather being distracted and exhausted with different work tasks and work environment.
In addtion to the first point, the opportunity to increase their skills is another factor why i support that universities should pay more salay for their professer. Given that money is the most, if not the only, moteviation for many people, professors are encourage to enhance their teaching skills when they are rewarded by more salary. For instance, professors are more flexanle to adabt different teaching techniques like impplementing songs, pictures ilustration, short lectures and comperhansive revision to assert that students precieve the information in a most easy and effective way.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that money money allow us to reach our ultimate goals. With more money payed to the university professors, the more and more efforts they will do to enhance the education process. Money as a reward helps the university professors to foucus on their jobs and encourage them to do more for the sake of their students benefits.
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money have a tangled effect in our quality of live.
money has a tangled effect in our quality of lives.
The basis for my views is because with a decent salary, professors are more dedicated for their class
The basis for my views is that with a decent salary, professors are more dedicated for their class
It also encourage them
It also encourages them
Sentence: Professor who offered a decient salary are more likely focus on his/her career as a university teacher and researcher.
Description: The fragment a decient salary is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Sentence: In other word, they can dedicated their time to finish their education tasks rather being distracted and exhausted with different work tasks and work environment.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to can and dedicated
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that money money allow us to reach our ultimate goals.
Description: The fragment money allow us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace allow with verb, past tense
Sentence: Money as a reward helps the university professors to foucus on their jobs and encourage them to do more for the sake of their students benefits.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and benefits
Sentence: In their endeavoring to achive their ultimate dreams and goals, people, including university profesors, are required to work hard to earn more money.
Error: profesors Suggestion: professors
Error: achive Suggestion: active
Sentence: Although some people believe that unversities should not spend more money on professor salary, I support that the university should, indeed, increase thier professor salaries to improve education quality.
Error: unversities Suggestion: universities
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: With ever increasing in monthely expenses like mortgage, gas and car insurance, professor are under a tremendous stress to work at a second or part time career to afford not only them selfs, but also their families.
Error: monthely Suggestion: monthly
Sentence: Increasing their salary wadges can have a tengible effect on their career.
Error: tengible Suggestion: tangible
Error: wadges Suggestion: wages
Sentence: Professor who offered a decient salary are more likely focus on his/her career as a university teacher and researcher.
Error: decient Suggestion: decent
Sentence: In addtion to the first point, the opportunity to increase their skills is another factor why i support that universities should pay more salay for their professer.
Error: salay Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: addtion Suggestion: addition
Error: professer Suggestion: professor
Sentence: Given that money is the most, if not the only, moteviation for many people, professors are encourage to enhance their teaching skills when they are rewarded by more salary.
Error: moteviation Suggestion: motivation
Sentence: For instance, professors are more flexanle to adabt different teaching techniques like impplementing songs, pictures ilustration, short lectures and comperhansive revision to assert that students precieve the information in a most easy and effective way.
Error: comperhansive Suggestion: comprehensive
Error: ilustration Suggestion: illustration
Error: precieve Suggestion: precise
Error: adabt Suggestion: adapt
Error: flexanle Suggestion: flexible
Error: impplementing Suggestion: implementing
Sentence: Money as a reward helps the university professors to foucus on their jobs and encourage them to do more for the sake of their students benefits.
Error: foucus Suggestion: focus
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 19 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 354 350
No. of Characters: 1802 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.338 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.09 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.658 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 129 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.125 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.245 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.375 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.537 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 569, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'encourages'?
Suggestion: encourages
...ass and researches development. It also encourage them to enhance their teaching skills. ...
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Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...remendous stress to work at a second or part time career to afford not only them selfs, b...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'dedicate'
Suggestion: dedicate
...and researcher. In other word, they can dedicated their time to finish their education ta...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'encouraged'.
Suggestion: encouraged
...viation for many people, professors are encourage to enhance their teaching skills when t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhancing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enhancing
...r many people, professors are encourage to enhance their teaching skills when they are rew...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: money
...As a conclusion, we can safely say that money money allow us to reach our ultimate goals. W...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for instance', 'no doubt']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272493573265 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.149100257069 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0899742930591 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462724935733 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0719794344473 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.105398457584 0.118717715034 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0308483290488 0.0351676179071 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74015738063 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0488431876607 0.0309702414327 158% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0642673521851 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179948586118 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00771208226221 0.0139019557991 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2201.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 353.0 408.028673835 87% => OK
Chars per words: 6.23512747875 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385269121813 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294617563739 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218130311615 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152974504249 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74015738063 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524079320113 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 56.1475969666 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0625 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2019107526 48.84282405 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.5625 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0625 20.5533526081 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 51.5242563739 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.52884615385 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395523523994 0.300154397459 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.114055184799 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0881953076737 0.0752933317313 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537006465681 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138958272138 0.151897553556 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163309686216 0.114077575197 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105928353872 0.0781384742642 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.34552356819 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0794361308407 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2931431811 0.210909579961 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938313884748 0.0618886996521 152% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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