No one can deny that there are both the positive and negative aspects of the statement that "The internet causes people to interact with each other less than they did in the past". If I were asked to choose, then I would definitely said that internet help in fast communication but whose consequence is slowing down the frequency of the meeting. It is my firm belief albiet it speed up the transfer of information due to number of reasons and I will develop my ideas into subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, in the growing world of development people are so much busy that they forget their family. In the universe of race, they don't have time for other as well as themselves. Due to this, negative effects had observed on older generation because they were always waiting for their children to come and talk to them. But in there busy schedule, they are in the state of avoiding them. Drawing from my own experience, I remembered an old lady lived besides my house. She is always sitting on the chair in garden and her eyes keep on searching people whom she can talk. Because she is feeling so alone the apartment instead of having five member. All are busy on phone either watching movie or playing games. This is due to the gap between generation and technology.
Secondly, in the marathon of become successful and richer. Human being is becoming so selfish, cruel, inhuman that they think, it's the parents to duty to make up grow. After that we are going to choose our path and no-one bothers each other. They even don't realize there duty for parents, what they want? what they need?. And internet encourages them too by providing facilities of message or call at faster rate and results in negligence of elder. They just call them either video or audio whatever suitable, without feeling the affection or expectation of their parents for them. Internet also boost up the loneliness of elder people. Technology is making world worse day by day. Data revealed that maximum old parents has been surviving by themselves and noone care for them
To sum up with, information and communication technology upsurge the transfer of data at high speed. Nevertheless, it causes bond to get weaker between family members while it would have long term disadvantage which can't fulfilled. So, at least try to meet the lovable one whenever possible, mainly during festive season because sending wishes on phone never replace your absence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
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Message: Did you mean 'speeds'?
Suggestion: speeds
...meeting. It is my firm belief albiet it speed up the transfer of information due to n...
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...r family. In the universe of race, they dont have time for other as well as themselv...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... on searching people whom she can talk. Because she is feeling so alone the apartment i...
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Suggestion: members
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... gap between generation and technology. Secondly, in the marathon of become succ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...there duty for parents, what they want? what they need?. And internet encourages the...
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Suggestion: termed
...family members while it would have long term disadvantage which cant fulfilled. So, ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, at least, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85851318945 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53366364957 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0265143888 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4166666667 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181452038036 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423151085549 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709977602638 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110672478388 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804776002087 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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