Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
I strongly agree with the viewpoint that Internet has largely had a positive influence on the society.
Some people might argue that internet has not only compounded but peddled challenging problems like that of misinformation and lack of physical activity amongst public. However, I strongly contend that this new age of connectivity has by and large, turned out to be extremely beneficial.
I would justify the position that I have taken with the following reasons.
Firstly, it has made information more readily available at costs that are nominal. Every morning, the weather in Atlanta can be checked with a few touches on our screen, which can then be processed to inform our commute decisions. Such evidence based conclusions can be drawn without spending a dime -thanks to the weather stations that first obtain this data from a satellite and then relay this information to our devices all because of the internet. In the absence of this network , we would have gazed at the sky to formulate predictions that would have eventually gained the infamous distinction of “ dubiousness” owning to their unreliability. This is important as information can be deployed to our concern and causes to further simplify and solve them.
Secondly, the internet has played a crucial role in driving the economy. A larger economy creates more opportunities for its citizens thereby ensuring a net positive growth of the society. It has achieved this through ways like -bringing businesses closer to customers, reducing turnaround times for business processes among many others. Gone are the days of depositing a cheque and waiting for days to get it cleared. Net banking powered through this technology can complete a transaction within a blink of an eye, drastically cutting down on the total time taken for transaction completion. Similarly, e-retail stores have used this connectivity to bring their entire product catalogue to their prospect’s home without the need of buying and maintaining physical stores. Thus, E-commerce has helped increase our economic pie which in turn has contributed in the well being of the society at large.
All in all, the evaluation of internet as a positive or negative influence is a complex one. Some have suggested that the new wave of misinformation spread through internet has contributed negatively in the well being of our society. Nevertheless, I contend that the Internet’s influence is still, by and large extremely positive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, thus, well, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31565656566 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02665983531 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573232323232 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8160976755 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.789473684 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0740984887063 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279109141588 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392000238369 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0631544866638 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509217921914 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.