Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the mordernization of human society, world has become more competitive and demanding. Academic institutions work to infuse knowledge and principles in students by offering different subjects and help them to ride the ladder of success. Some people are of opinion that broad knowledge of many academic subjects is more important than specialization in one subject. Other's might hold a different opinion. I, personally believe that a student must have profound knowledge in as many subjects as he want. I hold this opinion for certain reasons that I will explain in subsequent paragraphs.
First point to focus upon is that, learning different subjects brodens the knowledge of students. More opportunities would be there for them and they can excel in any field. For instance, During pursuing my regular Master's degree in commerce, I also joined MBA program from IGNOU, open university to excel in my related field and to broden my knowledge. This inturn enhanced my resume and grabbed me a good job profile.
Second subtle point is that nowadays, subjects are interlinked and interconnected. A student must have overall knowledge of subjects linked to their major area. An example from personal experience when I graduate school student studying human resource as my major subject. I was suppose to study subjects such as marketing, finance, personnel management and many more. Because, connected these subjects create base for the major subject.
Lastly, studying different subjects helps to deal with day to day problems and find solutions for them. For example, if I am a art student, studying basic math and science help me to generate my household budget and help my children with their studies.
In nutshell, studying different subjects outweigh the focus on one single major subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 533, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...und knowledge in as many subjects as he want. I hold this opinion for certain reason...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (MBA) must be used with a third-person verb: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
...s degree in commerce, I also joined MBA program from IGNOU, open university to excel in...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...man resource as my major subject. I was suppose to study subjects such as marketing, fi...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...olutions for them. For example, if I am a art student, studying basic math and sc...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, so, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 294.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2925170068 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81260228962 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5575790413 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94444444444 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232944529668 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843010456494 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829265809807 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136862143235 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819463858796 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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