Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, some people claim that having broad knowledge of many academic subjects takes the advantage of specializing in one specific subject. I am totally in favor of this point of view because of the following reasons.
In the first place, the method of learning has much more importance than the knowledge itself. In recent years, knowledge and information can be accessed to easily. Thus, it is not so essential for people to absorb knowledge as before. In order to reap the way of learning new things, people have to have trains of learning broad knowledge in many diverse subjects. Under these circumstances, if we are offered a brand new task, we can complete it in an easier way by using the method of learning which was acquired in board kinds of subjects.
Moreover, if we want to obtain high achievement in a field, we usually need the skills in other subjects because the boundaries between subject and another subject is becoming less clear. For example, if we are solving an issue in physics, we are supposed to use some methods in math, like reading functional images in order to understand the situation of an object. We also need to know some background in history so that we can understand the meaning of an ancient poem.
Eventually, there were many instances in the history showed that outstanding celebrities are usually those who have high achievements in a variety of subjects. For instance, Isaac Newton is a well-known schooler who stated the law of universal gravitation, he was an excellent physicist as well as a famous mathematician, he was also known for his extraordinary talents in literature. In this case, we can realize that it is not the knowledge in certain field which makes them outstanding, it is the way of thinking which can only be learnt by studying in diverse subjects.
In general, people should learn knowledge in a board way because we can learn many ways of studying new things from it. We can also utilize the skills we obtain from a fields into another.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in general, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8231884058 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78151246523 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5833305322 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.933333333 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156327460235 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624903431593 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0963362152601 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112033531284 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113255519976 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.