Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.
Without a shadow of a doubt, friends have played a prominent role in our individual's life. Everybody has many friends with different opinions, and They are stock in many subjects. Friends can help us to become great or weak. People spend a lot of time with their friends and listen to their advice. So it is necessary to find good friends. The controversial question which arises here is whether intelligent people are better for friends or humor people. I firmly believe that smart people are better and are more beneficial. There are numerous reasons, two of which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to my mind is that they help us not only to improve our minds but also to succeed in our life. Genuine people have many new ideas, and they are always trying to make creative things and find a new way. They always want to be more successful and achieve high levels. A famous Persian proverb says," The most excellent friends, The more success." When we have such friends, we can learn from them and find out how to create new ideas. Thus we can improve ourselves. For the purpose of illustration, my father is a great man, and he is so genuine and always surprise us with his inventive ideas. He has many awards in his life. If I want to describe him, I will say his a successful man. One day I ask him what your secret is? He said I have many friends in different levels of society, but the most important of them, who are more intelligent. They teach me how to improve myself and be innovation.
Furthermore, one should not neglect the fact that intelligent people are more powerful and achieve a good level in society, and they are more aware of social, so they have more knowledge. When we are friend with these people, they can help us to climb a better level, and we can know about their knowledge. There are many opportunities in every society, and we can figure them out. So we can know important issues. Research has shown that many knowledge does not exist in the library, and we must find them in society. Society includes the people who we have communication with, such as our friends. So, if people have more aware friends, they will have more knowledge.
In conclusion, whether intelligent friends are better or friend with a sense of humor is a challenging issue. I believe genuine people are better and more useful, for they help us to improve our mind and increase our knowledge. It highly recommended that people should be careful about their friend and how to chose a better one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61674008811 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54520350812 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440528634361 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2650374112 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.275862069 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6551724138 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31034482759 5.45110844103 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261921285843 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749728399438 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829694103487 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207293060174 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088596230279 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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