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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future.

What is supposed to be the essential element that has a great impact on our living standards? One answer lies in the money we possess. Since every penny ought to be made full use of, a general controversy arises whenever people are deciding where the money should be used. Some people advocate spending money on traveling and vacations is more beneficial, whereas the reverse side holds the opposing viewpoint that money should be saved for the future. As far as I am concerned, spending money for the future is as important as traveling and vacation.

On the one hand, saving money is a good habit for us to build the ability to get to grips with the crisis in the future. When having enough deposit, one is granted the chance to face the potential difficulties and risks in life. Moreover, the upside of saving money is that we can have the right to say “No” when we have to grapple with some tough issues related to finance. When a financial crisis breaks out, money is still the prerequisite to anything else, without which we may suffer from a tough life, mentally and physically. In addition, saving money does not mean just putting money into your bank account. We can still try to buy some financial products, such as stocks, and appreciate the joy of harvest on the stock market. Take me as an example. During my university study time, at first, I always wasted money on meaningless stuff. Realizing that I always did not have enough money when I needed to tackle some unprecedented issues, I decided to save money for the future and even tried to put some money into my own stock account. Ultimately, I found I would never be nervous when facing those emergencies and even have more choices.

On the other hand, spending money on traveling and vacations is no less important than saving money. Admittedly, traveling is one of the most efficient ways for us to enlarge our minds and horizons, and vacation is also conducive to our health. To illustrate, people who travel overseas can have intimate interactions with the local citizens while fully immersing themselves in a foreign culture that used to be learned from books and screens. For people who take trips within their own nation, it is a blessed opportunity to appreciate the beauty of the marvelous landscapes of various parts of the country, cultivating both a sense of pride and patriotism for their motherland. Thus, it is definitely worthwhile to spend money on traveling and vacation since they help people equip themselves with a comprehensive understanding of the world and take a break from their busy life. Imagine a person who never spends money on traveling and vacation. Although he might have enough money for the rest of his life, he still cannot really enjoy himself, and the money is nothing more than the number in his bank account and useless paper laying in his wallet.

With the reference to the arguments above, there should be no absolute superiority of either one over the other. People possess the right to decide which one is suitable for them. As a consequence, it is reasonable to conclude that saving money is as pivotal as spending money on traveling and vacations.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, thus, whereas, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2629.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 548.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79744525547 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83832613839 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60452733841 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 212.727598566 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501824817518 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 840.6 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5477357131 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.16 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.92 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.48 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372666317585 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119021647987 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108119145813 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250274640597 0.150856017488 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416578049666 0.0645574589148 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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