Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to use printed materials such as books and articles to do research than it is to use the internet. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people believe that for research it is better to use the internet over printed materials. However, others think the opposite, it is better to have physically books than internet version of them. In my opinion, using internet books overweight printed ones as I will talk over in this article.
First of all, for the usage of printed materials there will be the deforestation and pollution drawbacks which it will be necessary to get over. For instance, maybe one tree will be required for the production of ten books. Thus, for the production of a hundred, or even a thousand of books hundreds of trees will be necessary. This shows that research through internet scrimps money and space and, it does not raze the environment.
Moreover, on internet a person will certainly find thousands of books and articles. The space to store them is much bigger than a library. We can find books from all over the world. The database is colossal. For example, when I was a student achieving my master degree, I needed to read thousands of different books to hash out the course. Thanks to the internet I could accomplish the chore by leaps and bounds. This shows that using the internet is faster and better because we save time and space.
Finally, I still support the usage of internet for research because it does not eradicate the environment and we can save money, time and space through internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1977.66487455 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 242.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78099173554 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55890577603 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2977178992 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190770462887 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704226655525 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657550569964 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131382336524 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838645151199 0.0645574589148 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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