Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to work as a member of a team than as an individual in order to succeed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.
Together with the transformation of the human saga, mankind have began to work in order to suceed. Thus, recently, a debate about whether it is better to work as a member of a team than as an individual in order to suceed ot not. While sizable number of populace might assert that it is better to work as individual in order to suceed, without a shodaw of a doubt, it is better to work as a member of a team to suceed. In midst of insurmountable bases, there are seemingly two eye-catching facets.
First and foremost reason is that a person could get variety of ideas that could not come up alone. Every person has different perspectives, and the reason why each person has different perspectives depend on different reason. It could be due to different background, education, and lessons learned from other people. Therefore, when people encounter same situation, they interpret in different way. This different perspectives are important in working. Because, when people work, they inevitable encounter situations to solve, and in order to success, those people needs to find the best way to solve the situation while minimizing its losses. If a person try to solve the problem alone, that person could only come up with few ideas due to limited perspectives, however, if number of team members think together to deal with the problem, they would be able to come up with variety of ideas and solve the problem with most efficient idea. For example, one of my friends named John had a trouble solving the problem in the research that he has to finish for his final assessment. The problem was how to get a reliable research data while satisfying the requirements professor provided. He struggled to find answer for a month and until one of his friend gave him an advice that he was not able to think up. After he got an idea from his friend that he was not able to come up alone, he was able to manage final assessment and successfully graduate with a high grade. Basically, working with a team could help dealing with problems with unique idea that a person alone cannot come up.
On top of that, team members could care each other's mental health. When working in order to sucess, it is inevitable for a person to fail and lost that he build up to be suceessful. In those times, people struggle to work again by taking failure as lessons and instead, they give up. These renounce especially occurs among people who are working alone because if a person fails alone, then there is no one who could support him and care his mental health, furthermore, a person alone should deal with all the burdens from the failure, therefore, more pressure. However, if a person work as a team member, then even though he fails, he can stand up back since there are team members who supports his mental health and shares the burden, therefore, allows a person to learn lesson from fails and become successful in the future. Ultimately, as person who work as a member of a team can get support from his team members and allows him to work again, it allows a person to success.
From the above substantiation and assessments, the fact that it is better to work as a member of a team than as an individual in orer to suceed seems much more convincing. Not only it allows a person to have variety of ideas that cannot come up alone, but also, team members could support in times of failures that allows a person to work again and success. Therefore, nothing in my mind regarding the previous issue overweighs the ideas stated above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
...rmation of the human saga, mankind have began to work in order to suceed. Thus, recen...
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Line 3, column 1154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'requirements'' or 'requirement's'?
Suggestion: requirements'; requirement's
...able research data while satisfying the requirements professor provided. He struggled to fin...
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Line 3, column 1264, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'advice'.
Suggestion: advice
...th and until one of his friend gave him an advice that he was not able to think up. After...
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Line 3, column 1510, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to deal' or 'deal'.
Suggestion: to deal; deal
...sically, working with a team could help dealing with problems with unique idea that a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 103.0 52.1666666667 197% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2901.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 624.0 407.700716846 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64903846154 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.99799879888 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56564006388 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.415064102564 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 913.5 618.680645161 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.0308622819 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.04 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.96 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149391387976 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517389155243 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495710038172 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120164018601 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412096867531 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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