Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: It is easier for parents to raise children now than 50 years ago.
With the explosive development of modern society, so much is new and complex. When it comes to the topic that whether raising children is easier for parents now than 50 years ago, there are numerous arguments on both sides of the debate. For me, I agree that it is easier for parents to raise children now than 50 years ago.
First of all, the advances in modern medicine improved children's health. With the development of medicine, children can get better healthcare, which makes it easy for parents to raise children. For example, my great-grandmother delivered 3 babies during 1949-1955, when the medical services are still limited. But two of her children died at a young age because of a serious disease named Hepatitis, and only my grandfather survived. However, the situation has changed now. In 2022, when my niece was born, the hospital scheduled his immunization, for example, when he was 1 month old, he was supposed to be given Hep B vaccines, and when he was 3 months old, the hospital should give him Hep A vaccines. These medical advancements protect him from serious diseases and get his parents less worried about his health. Thus, it is easier for parents to raise children now than 50 years ago.
Moreover, with the advent of the Internet and social media, parents are now more informed, making raising their children easier. Social media platforms such as Facebook or WeChat make parents exposed to different kinds of knowledge. My experience would do a stellar job explaining this point. When my son, who was born in 2022, had difficulty getting asleep, I searched on the Internet how to get babies falling asleep, and asked my friend who had raised two kids on WeChat for advice. Through this, I learned to turn off the light in his room and put a towel beside him, and the information really helped me a lot. In contrast, parents 50 years ago did not have other information sources to refer to. Therefore, the accessibility of information indicates that it is easier for parents to raise children now than 50 years ago.
Admittedly, there do exist some factors that may contribute to the point that raising a child has become difficult today, for instance, nowadays parents have less time to care for their children because the competition has increased significantly in modern society. However, we have to realize that parents 50 years ago are more struggling to live than today. So, raising children now has become easier than 50 years ago.
In conclusion, based on the reasoning above, I have to maintain that it is easier for parents to raise children now than 50 years ago.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84753363229 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64929076912 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511210762332 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8650747794 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2727272727 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.505140557704 0.236089414692 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197532830405 0.076458572812 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.200359568999 0.0737576698707 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377605743365 0.150856017488 250% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106744119456 0.0645574589148 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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