By and large it is established beyond doubt that education is the most important factor that could be used as usable tool in order to develop a country, and number of well-educated people in each country could be used as a symbol development. Some people may hold the view that the rate of educated individuals have been increased profoundly in comparison to past due to ease of facilities that provide better situation for studying. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people who pursue their education in academic level is reducing due to frustrating economic situation and lack of job opportunities after graduation. From my vantage point, the former view seems to have rationale aspect in comparison to the latter viewpoint. I will elaborate on my idea through three noticeable reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my stand point is concerned with this issue that everything has been changed during last decades about education. In other word, people have different perspective about education in comparison to their last generation. In this regard, not only many individuals study for better job opportunity for their future career, but also they pursue their education in order to heighten their knowledge in widespread of field. In addition, there are many issues that intensify people motivation such as the-state-of- the- art universities, excellent facilities in laboratories, libraries and to name by a few. The more fascinating facilities, the more motivation for study. In spite of the fact that in past there were a number of well-educated teachers and professors, nowadays the number of specialist in many field such as art, engineering, literature, mathematics and so forth have been increased drastically in comparison to last decades.
Another reason which deserve some word here is that economic situation of families were in worse condition that avoid their children to continue their education after high school. Otherwise, many parents could not afford the initial needs of their family, as matter of fact in worst condition their children could pursue their education until primary school. Therefore, the rate of illiteracy was in poor condition many years ago. Nowadays, the number of student who continue their study in academic level are in galloping rate, this exponential increase is due to incredible facilities that governments provide for free schools and universities which motivate many individuals to get academic degree from universities or colleges. An empirical study in this filed shows that the percent of student that abandoned their school in order to work and help their family reduced significantly in comparison to last decades.
Although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, they are by no means the only reasons available. Actually, there is another subtle point which must be borne in mind. According to some recent studies, by advent of new technologies such as internet or smart application brings glamorous future for next generation. In other word, these facilities provide situation that leads to easy way of studying by using online courses provided by many universities. The noteworthy statistics, revealed by a recent research, indicate that more than thirty percent of employees who want to pursue their education in MA degree tend to use electronic online courses that provide by universities.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, people could be well-educated in comparison to past by numerous advancement in technology or perspective of people about education. But that was a story in nutshell; as a matter of fact, actually there are a plethora of other reasons and examples supporting the statement which are not mentioned here due to dearth of time. It is anticipated that number of well-educated people will increase more and more in recent years.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'mind substantiating'.
Suggestion: mind substantiating
... reasons. The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my stand point is concerned with this i...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...their knowledge in widespread of field. In addition, there are many issues that in...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...intensify people motivation such as the state of the art universities, excellent facilities in l...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y people motivation such as the state of the art universities, excellent facilit...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple motivation such as the state of the art universities, excellent facilities i...
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Line 3, column 846, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun field seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fields'.
Suggestion: many fields
...s, nowadays the number of specialist in many field such as art, engineering, literature, m...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
...eeds of their family, as matter of fact in worst condition their children could pursue t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'by and large', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261313868613 0.229887763892 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.157664233577 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.113868613139 0.0866891130778 131% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0335766423358 0.046263068375 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0321167883212 0.0685040099705 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150364963504 0.118717715034 127% => OK
Participles: 0.0467153284672 0.0351676179071 133% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87716143158 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0350364963504 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0700729927007 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014598540146 0.0209618222197 70% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021897810219 0.0139019557991 158% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3955.0 2387.08602151 166% => OK
No of words: 632.0 408.028673835 155% => Write the essay in 30 minutes. Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25791139241 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.01394158123 4.48200974243 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375 0.338922669872 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286392405063 0.251872472559 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.232594936709 0.174417080927 133% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.170886075949 0.112833075102 151% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87716143158 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 295.0 212.727598566 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.466772151899 0.524397521467 89% => OK
Word variations: 57.7482579472 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 26.3333333333 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8926508554 48.84282405 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.791666667 120.699889404 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.5533526081 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 54.9725738397 45.7405998639 120% => OK
Elegance: 2.0522875817 1.45489161554 141% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298987770757 0.300154397459 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11374490422 0.103427244359 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068062672919 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.508006524815 0.497263757937 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145091352276 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121600671413 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599305195196 0.0781384742642 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.433287619977 0.336927656856 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0963460226228 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220616027859 0.210909579961 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470554888182 0.0618886996521 76% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 2.4623655914 325% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.6433691756 154% => OK
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There are still some grammar issues.
Rates: 85 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30