Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, several important events are happening around the world. Some people suggest that we should follow the news even though it is unlikely to affect us. However, I think that we should not follow news that is not important to our lives because it is unhelpful, recorded, and time-consuming to read.
First, nothing good will happen from knowing the news. Knowing unimportant events does not provide us with any good things. Moreover, even if you recognize those situations, you cannot benefit from them. For instance, my friend always checks the political news and knows the content of every story about famous political figures. However, he cannot use this information to benefit himself because he is not working for any political parties.
Second, when news is necessary for our lives, we can just search for it and read it on the internet. Older, more important events are still recorded on several websites. When these events matter in our lives, we can easily find information about them. From my personal experience, I have no interest in political news. Nevertheless, when the election is happening, I can search for important events in the past few years in order to have enough information to make my decision.
Last, knowing all the news irrelevant to our lives is time-consuming. Some news may be important to a particular group of people but not others. For example, news about admission dates is very important for students, but not so much for working people. Furthermore, important news that is unrelated to you is abundant on the internet. If we consume all news happening around the world, it will take a very long time to do it. On the contrary, if we use that time to improve ourselves, we can definitely get something in return.
In sum, I strongly disagree that being well-versed in what is happening around the world is useful to our lives. Knowing everything does not provide any advantages for our lives. If we consider it important at any point in time, we can search for it on the internet and read the news about those events, but most of the events will not be important to our lives. Furthermore, reading such news requires a lot of time.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 3
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is important to know about events happening around the world even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, well, for example, for instance, i think, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88978494624 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70019221191 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475806451613 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1797835178 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.619047619 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185231627246 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673982620314 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052802773822 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121830970104 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391206339531 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.