Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, it is easy to quickly read about international news. Personally, I strongly agree with the opinion that knowing international events plays a crucial part in life. I feel this way with two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, knowing international news is beneficial for a new career. Job search consultants suggest that learning job-hunting skills from foreign countries can help get a new job more quickly. My personal experience is a compelling success of this. A few months ago, my company was suffering from some financial issues, so I decided to apply for a new job. It has always been stressful while searching for a new job. I was disappointed at the beginning because my resume was rejected by several recruiters. Luckily, since I maintain a habit of reading internal news every day, I read a news about inspiring resumes design. Consequently, I came up with an idea that I can use my computer skills to make a stunning, eye-catching resume. A few days later, a recruiter in an international company contacted me and planed an interview. The interview process went on smoothly and I was accepted by the company. If it had not been for those innovative ideas from foreign employees, I wouldn’t have found a new job within a few weeks.
Secondly, knowing about the events happening in other parts of the world ensures one’s safety. Especially for those who go abroad frequently, it is crucial to know the local circumstances of the country you are visiting. For instance, a few years ago, my brother was planning on a business trip to Thailand. Since he doesn’t read about international news quite often, he had no idea what was happening at the time. It wasn’t until a friend of his told him did he realize there were some protests against Chinese people. Thus, he rescheduled his business trip to one month later. In my opinion, if it had not been for the news from his friend, he could definitely be in danger. To some extent, the international news saved his life.
Thirdly, learning things that happened outside your country can broaden your horizon. It helps us learn more about political issues, climate change, economy growth, culture changes and even environmental protections. One interesting example is the climate change near the North Pole. The green house effect caused by global warming affected the inhabitants of polar bears. The increasing temperature causes the glaciers to melt and there was a decline on the land where the polar bears live. This phenomenon drew people's attention to environmental protections. As a result, governments in many countries introduced more policies to reduce the pollutions caused by factories. It seems that small event happens elsewhere has nothing to do with your own country, however, as demonstrated in the example, it actually affects people’s life in an unpredictable way.
In conclusion, I strongly believe knowing international news plays an important role in our life. This is because it helps us to get a better job and it avoids us from danger.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 589, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...reading internal news every day, I read a news about inspiring resumes design. Consequ...
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Line 8, column 841, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an unpredictable way" with adverb for "unpredictable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... it actually affects people's life in an unpredictable way. In conclusion, I strongly believe k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2618.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99929430239 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561776061776 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 812.7 618.680645161 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 22.0 9.59856630824 229% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5566887298 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8125 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156543548812 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378429506115 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526846304866 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960551179231 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570650119055 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 86.8835125448 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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