Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that obtaining knowledge about events that occurred around the world is really necessary for people who pursue valuable goals and happy life for humankind. Therefore, I, to a great extent, agree with this idea that it is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
First and foremost, in the modern world, all kinds of events that happen in even very distant areas could have a significant effect on the living condition in other countries. For example, the political disorder which occurred in Syria not only suffer Syrian citizens, but also create a lot of political conflicts, economic and security problems for other countries. Presence of the terrorist group in this country produced threatened for people who live even in other continents like French. However, if people in different areas were more sensitive about assisting Syria, maybe the problem did not get worse like now.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that some mistake decisions could equally put the human being at risk. For example, global warming is very familiar with mutual concern for people. Sharing information about governments who get out from environmental laws by abusing from natural resources such as fossil fuels and extraordinary mining duplicate earth resources and produced environmental pollution. It is our duty to react against these type of illegal behaviors.
Finally, yet importantly, the widespread coverage of news by networks and media give people merit details and knowledge about cultural values in a different section of the world. These new ideas can be inspiring to us in order to find a novel solution for a happier life. For example, establishing new national ceremonies which did not exist priory in our culture could increase happiness and positive mode among people in a new location.
On the basis of the reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that it is important to know about vents happening around the world, even if it is unlike that they will affect your life. Because all parts of the world depend on each other, and in some way awarding from this information is a human ethical task, and because these notions can be used as a source for new ideas for a better life.
- The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide. 73
- TPO 45 3
- If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. 92
- Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cellphone, online games and social networking websites. 73
- Do you agree or disagree?in the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, as for, for example, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05943152455 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61607202422 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565891472868 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.7385161177 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.533333333 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241900442549 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906861379171 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157451384898 0.0737576698707 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15872815989 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153233956039 0.0645574589148 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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