Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are tow point of views toward working hours for long or short time over five days or it is better over three days. From my opinion i see that it is better to work three days for long hours. And my view will be analyzed in this essay for further explanation.
First of all, there is no debate that reaching the maturity means start looking for your dream job, and the selection of our carrier depend on different criteria. On the one hand, that the working hours is very crucial. Furthermore, is it a long the week or not?. Foe example, I am fresh graduated from nursing school and my future job will be six days in the week around eight hours. However my mother is a teacher and works five days around six hours.
Secondly, when the job last three days until with longer time is better for a different reasons, firstly they can manage there time and duties effectively. And the vivid example is my brother he works as a teaching assistance ship with his professor and at the same time he studys electrical engineer. Also, and the most important one is they will have the rest of the week to do every things they want, simply they can take a rest without worrying about their job. Because of long time working, they can get the maximum benefit and take the experience. For instance, some lab result appear at the same day but need long time so you can learn more by long time job.
In conclusion, I think my point of view is strong and solid enough to illustrate all the previous reasons. and I believe that working to longer time is the best choice for comfortable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...better over three days. From my opinion i see that it is better to work three day...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ix days in the week around eight hours. However my mother is a teacher and works five d...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'reason'?
Suggestion: reason
...h longer time is better for a different reasons, firstly they can manage there time and...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...to illustrate all the previous reasons. and I believe that working to longer time i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 292.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43150684932 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24179871419 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3448678299 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2666666667 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 5.45110844103 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314365440072 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107567974752 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062896317367 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176185294757 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666246531141 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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