There is no gainsaying that people spend a great proportion of their lives for working and they organize other aspects of their lives based on the working hours. There is a controversial debates about the working days per week, the great majority of people work five days per week these days while some people believe that people should work less days like three days instead of the five days per week. From my perspective, people should work fewer days (three days) per week since people not only have more time for spending with their families but also enjoy more entertainment. Moreover people are able to be more efficient in their working places. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that people who work three days per week rather than five days, have more time to spend with their families. There is no doubt that people spend plenty time for preparing themselves for working, commuting to work place and etc in each working day. If people work three days per week, they save more time for being at home with their families. For example, the heavy traffics especially in big cities waste people time for commuting to working place. In other words, these days people have noticeable problems for being with their families. Therefore, people are capable to spend more time with their families rather than being in working place, heavy traffics and etc.
Second point that comes to my mind is that the the great majority of people have trouble for spending their weekends. To put in apposite words, people just do some limited activities in two days weekends like going movie theater, shopping, restaurant and etc. while people working three days per week, have a four days weekends, thus they are capable to do incredible activities. For example, people are able to travel to near cities and they can enjoy camping, hiking and etc. Hence, more weekends days provide a better opportunity for people to go to trip or do their favorite activities.
The last but not least, when people work three days per week, the are more productive and efficient in working place for at least couple of reasons. Firstly, when employees have four days weekend they are likely to work better and more energic in their working places. Secondly, most of the employees when are working, they should stop working and postpone their working to next day. In contrast, people who work three days per week, they should spend more hours per days and they can concentrate bettor on their working activities.
In conclusion, contemplating aforementioned paragraphs, the advantages of working three days rather than five days working outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'debate'?
Suggestion: debate
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun days is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...lies but also enjoy more entertainment. Moreover people are able to be more efficient in...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: etc.
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2255.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97792494481 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39227404642 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39293598234 0.524837075471 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4743634644 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.380952381 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322170181808 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145118809631 0.076458572812 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720923096234 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237044806401 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321867597466 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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