Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As friends in our lives is a important factor, Personally i believe it's better to always looking for new friends. and i think in this way for several reasons that i will explain in the following essay.
First i can mention that new friends mean new people and new ideas and mentalities and they can bring novel ideas and information to our lives, and it could be so useful learning new things. it could be learnt new skill, new art like playing a new musical instrument, or painting, and even what new video games available. I remember when i was in high school I had lots of different friends who have different jobs, and that could help me to have good prospect of what each occupation is and finally pursue my ideal job. And as a result of having many friends it was never a dull moment in my life.
Secondly having varieties of friends , could help you when some problems arises like when you need money, or a hand for doing some work. I remember when my brother , was jobless, one of my friends could find him a job, myself always was confident that there is always some one to help me in a difficult circumstances.
Thirdly, in a mental aspect of health, i think access to new people can have positive effect on your character and spirit. For example when i was in high school i was in difficulty with my parents and some of my friends could help me to be more patient and stronger and how to deal with problems with my family, and after graduation that was a important factor to me to gain my independence and prosperity.
In conclusion, i am of the opinion that making new friends is of paramount importance to our lives because there would lots of benefits for our health, working, family and learning.
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- TOEFL T P O 20 Integrated Writing Task 7
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer . 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer . 66
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
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...my friends could find him a job, myself always was confident that there is always some one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 314.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51910828025 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.515868561 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6489844394 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 5.45110844103 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175866430101 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708013923813 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432569190004 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996176197375 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368509791254 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.