Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Some people prefer to make new friends than keep their old friends. They need to connect new people during their life. I think it is more rational to make new friends than to spend time with old friends. I will explain my main reasons hereunder.
The First and foremost reason is that we need a new viewpoint in our lives, and we can achieve it with a new friend who has a different view; moreover it helps us to look at an issue carefully. For example, one of my high school teachers who was teaching art, and he was not letting students speak about Richard Brautigan, who is a great and famous writer. He told us that the Brautigan was a crazy author who wrote demoniac stories, and if you read his books, you will lose your mind! Some next years, I had a professor who was working on Bruatiban's stories at university. I had to take an essential course with him. Hence, He showed me the fact of Brautigan's novels. So, at the end of the graduation, I wrote my thesis about Brautigan's books.
The second reason for making a new friend is simple and essential. The world has been changing and our lives too. We must be having a unique experience and the latest information about affairs' life. If we have a friend who has great skills or knowledge about an issue, we can easily solve our problem by his help. For instance, a trader who fails in his business was consulted with some friends that they do not have an accurate view toward all the essential aspects of a business. As a result, the friends advise him wrongly in his job. The merchant won't progress in his work unless he starts making new friends and listening to new ideas and practical solutions.
In conclusion, have a new friend enhances our view towards life and helps us to have a fresh outlook on people or events. Therefore, a new friend gives us new experiences and knowledge that save us from dangerous situations.
- People today spent too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doings things they should do 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children 70
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Agree or Disagree 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48546511628 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45993964748 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1798509207 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2105263158 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1052631579 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280898159412 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953056724535 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10485936062 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189279333177 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917947987724 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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