Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Nowadays countries progress at a very high pace and compete with each other. There are several things that play an important role in the development of the country. Governments try to improve facilities and laws in order to make society a better and greater place to live. Improving facilities like transportation, the Internet, and medical health are some of the things that get a lot of attention. There is a big debate about whether it is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access or to improve public transportation. In my opinion, I agree and believe it is more significant to improve Internet access. In this essay, I am going to explain three potential reasons to support my idea.
First of all, public transportation already improved enough, but for internet access, there is room for growth. Public transportation has been going on for many years and the government spent a lot on those projects and it is advanced enough to meet our needs. On the other hand, the internet just merged into our lives a few decades ago. While everyone has access to public transportation, so many people in further regions do not have an access to the internet or have a very poor connection through it. Therefore, spending money on increasing internet access for everyone is logical.
Secondly, in modern societies, everything is going to depend on the internet. With the growth of the internet, most governments try to maximize the usage of the internet. Modern countries transferring paper works on the internet platform to decrease costs and save time. For example, about 5 or 6 years ago people have to go to the bank and do various things like purchasing bills, rents. But now you can just open the bank application and do everything with just one click without going anywhere. So, as the internet improves, it will have lots of advantages for people and also governments.
Finally, in my opinion, the growth of the Internet causes the growth of society. As I mentioned in the second reason, every modern society using the internet in every aspect. The semi-modern countries which do not have access to valuable sources for example in education can be in touch with them through the internet. The Internet makes everything in access in virtual form. For instance, I live in Iran and I can participate in valuable courses, seminars that popular professors hold. Since the internet came into our lives and available to use, now I am able to learn many new and update things.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, it is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. There are a lot of advantages, I just talked about three of them which I think were the important ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 353, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...n, the Internet, and medical health are some of the things that get a lot of attention. The...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...y people in further regions do not have an access to the internet or have a very poor con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8914893617 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8138899161 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478723404255 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5490149525 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.4230769231 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444594698208 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123526532531 0.076458572812 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13401702108 0.0737576698707 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271564208707 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108822611144 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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