Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Infrastructures are the most important index of progress in countries. Both internet and transportation are infrastructures, but the functions of this is different. In this regard, some people are of the opinion that transportation is important than the internet for development. Personally, I disagree with this statement due to various reasons, two of which I'm going to elaborate upon to substantiate my viewpoint in the following essay.
First and foremost, countries need infrastructures for development and progress. Infrastructure can influence each other and also can influence people's life. Effect of developing of infrastructure in first step Making life easier for the citizens of the country. Also, infrastructures can cause the development of the industries of the country. Between the two most important infrastructures, transportation, and the internet, transportation is a basic and important than the internet. Transportation It includes the communication vessels of the country that use to transporting goods and people across the country. Also, transportation can affect for development of the internet because the internet needs to develop and constructive which transportation can provide them.
Secondly, From time immemorial, people have needed to communicate. Internet and transportation are both two types of communication instruments, but transportation is a basic way of transportation. Transportation can connect people in any situation using different vehicles. In other words, transportation includes a wide range of means of transportation as well as structures such as roads, airports, and railways.
In conclusion, having considered the aforementioned points, I firmly believe that It is more important for governments to spend money to improve public transportation. This is because not only transportation can improve develop the mending country, but also it can connect people in a more effective way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88339222615 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78820670734 2.67179642975 142% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501766784452 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3052361398 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9411764706 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6470588235 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240392838263 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817705562913 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689870480958 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161737327097 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058409187592 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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