Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends.
Whenever we face a adversity in life we turn to friends. Whenever we face a serious problem in life we turn to fiends. Whenever we want to have fun we call our friends. So basically, friends are very important in life and we should make a lots of friends and treat them well. Its not a question of how many friends we should have, keep 2-3 friends but friends which will be there for you whenever you need them. So, I think it is more important to keep old friends rather than to make new ones.
Many a times we forget our old friends in an attempt to make new ones, the ones who are temporary friends. Temporary friends are usually the ones which come in our life very late and those who remember us only when they face a hard-time. They are not available for us when we face hardships in our life. They give us reasons for not being there for us. Such friends are temporary and not the worth of our friendship. Instead of giving our precious time to such new temporary friends give that time and efforts to our old friends, which you have known for a long time. This will definitely make difference.
I had very close friend in my childhood. We were too close, totally inseparable, then we went to college, same college. I started to look for new friends, started to hang around many different boys. Due to this I was unable to meet my old friend from childhood, and we drifted apart and now we barely talk to each other. And the irony is that the boys for whom i used to ditch my childhood friend are not even my friends now. They just used me as a temporary time pass and now i am left with no friends.
Making new friends, having a very big group is very tempting specially in our youth years. We see many such groups and feel envious of them. But look at the same group after couple of years, those who once used to be in a same group, those who looked cool and totally inseparable now dont even remember each others names. Its just a sad truth of this harsh world. Prefer quality over quantity. Prefer good old friend less in number, even a single true old friend is more precious than thousand new temporary fiends.
So, the conclusion is that, it is more important to keep our old friends than to make new ones. I learnt it the hard way, but i dont want you to be as stupid as me. So cherish your old friends, give them your precious time, hang with them, talk with them and definitely help them as much as you can when they face hardships in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whenever we face a adversity in life we turn to ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Whenever we face a adversity in life we turn to friends. W...
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...a adversity in life we turn to friends. Whenever we face a serious problem in life we tu...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ious problem in life we turn to fiends. Whenever we want to have fun we call our friends...
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Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ious problem in life we turn to fiends. Whenever we want to have fun we call our friends...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[3]
Message: Possible agreement error – use past participle here: 'funned'.
Suggestion: funned
...urn to fiends. Whenever we want to have fun we call our friends. So basically, frie...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ry important in life and we should make a lots of friends and treat them well. Its not...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... a lots of friends and treat them well. Its not a question of how many friends we s...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...nds rather than to make new ones. Many a times we forget our old friends in an attempt...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...for new friends, started to hang around many different boys. Due to this I was unable to meet ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...And the irony is that the boys for whom i used to ditch my childhood friend are n...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...sed me as a temporary time pass and now i am left with no friends. Making new fr...
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...looked cool and totally inseparable now dont even remember each others names. Its ju...
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Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: less
...y over quantity. Prefer good old friend less in number, even a single true old friend is more ...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...e true old friend is more precious than thousand new temporary fiends. So, the conclusi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...w ones. I learnt it the hard way, but i dont want you to be as stupid as me. So cher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26068376068 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19275748872 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435897435897 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8687259155 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2142857143 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.35714285714 5.45110844103 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298590114947 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982376349341 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124501794354 0.0737576698707 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190704677468 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622310895619 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.15 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.