Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The human is a social creature so, communication plays a substantial role in human"s life. Some people consider holding old people more important than making new friends. In my view there are a lot of reasons that dedicate holing old friends is more important than making new friends. In which trust and comprehend are more important than other. In the following, I will elaborate on this subject.
Trust plays a pivotal role in friendship. It takes a long time to create trust between people. People who are friends experience a lot of events together, go to the trips, support each other in sadness and happiness, that lead to creating a high degree of trust between them. I have an old friend. We have known each other since we were 15 years old. We have had a lot of unforgettable memories that create during this 15 years, Such as exam night when we help each other to pass the exam, many trips that we went together. I remember that whenever there were a lot of problems in my life that my friend supports me and did not leave me an alone encounter with this problems. On the other hand, I try to compensate his manner. This kind of behavior and experience that create a strong trust between us which you can not find similar this in a new friendship, I firmly believe that keeping old friends by far is more important than making a new friend.
Have a mutual comprehension one of the essential elements in every friendship. Being together for a long time create a high degree of awareness from each other behavior which will not be in new friendship. For my old friend have a high degree of comprehending from my reaction. He even can recognize that I have a problem with my mood without I tell him anything about it. I remember I had a financial problem and I was ashamed to say about that to anybody. My friend recognized that I had a problem and tried to solve that. If he was a new friend, certainly he could not recognize that problem.
To wrap up, a lot of reasons indicate keeping old friends is more important than making new friends such as Trust and mutual comprehension. I believe that real friendship constitutes in the long term and we should pay attention to it.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, kind of, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54545454545 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65567734889 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464646464646 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3950167007 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2608695652 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2173913043 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225359858445 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721605711206 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973958915865 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172410610183 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810023890565 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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