Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good thing for people to move to a new town or country because they lose their old friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Regarding migrating to a newplace, different people can have different opinions. Some people argue that it is certainly not a good idea because of the risk of losing the old friends, while others consider trying to live in a brend new place is a good idea. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former statement that migrating to a new place makes me depressed in most situation, and I will explain why I stand this viewpoint.

To begin with, making new friends sometimes makes me stressful. It is not to say that I have social anxiety, but interacting with other people, especiaaly the strangers, really exhausts me. For example, when I entered a new class in college, I have to manage my behavior properly in order to maintain a good impression. Also, commnicatig to the strangers or acquaints, depression usually lingered around me, since I realize them little. And, I believe moving to a new place will much worse than the conditon above. Hence, I prefer not to do so if it is not necessary.

Furthermore, it will be pity that lose the connection of old firends. It spends an amount of time to build a relationship. In a meanwhile, relationship need to be maintained, or it will vanish sooner or later. For instance, I moved from country to the captital to enter the college. Then, I alomost lost the contact of the friends in my hometime. We might just meet once or twice a year, owing to the far distance, which grieves me because we are used to be good friends.

Lastly, when you struggle with the troubles, old friends are more willing to lend a land. The news friends from new place may prone to rejection, for you are not familiar enough. Moreover, it is difficult to make friend in a place with different culture. In this case, people will be forced to handle all the things by themselves. To aviod the helpless situation, I definetiely do not long for a new life in new place.

In a nutshell, I firmly believe that migrating to other place is not a good idea, owing to the risks of losing the old friends. It is because the depression I will get from making new friends and I cherish the old relationship. Also, I do not want to trapped into a helpless situation when struggling.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
...stance, which grieves me because we are used to be good friends. Lastly, when you strug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, while, for example, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1812.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56423173804 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74207016522 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513853904282 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6369474597 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7826086957 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2608695652 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82608695652 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260103303382 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070137027138 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434355535181 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149256993351 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345757489338 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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